School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。例如“located in a rural area in the city”表达不够准确，应明确是城市的郊区或乡村地区。

Ví dụ: My school is situated in the suburbs of the city, surrounded by greenery. It offers a comfortable environment with spacious facilities and friendly, professional staff.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达，避免重复，并注意句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like my school and would recommend it to others because it has abundant study materials, well-equipped facilities, and professional, friendly teachers who support students.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且连贯，但句子较长，建议适当分句，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, my school is a good place to study because it has well-equipped facilities, such as modern computer labs and 24-hour libraries, where students can focus on their research. Moreover, the teachers are professional and friendly, always ready to help.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意句子完整性和准确性，避免使用“I guess”显得不确定。

Ví dụ: My school is located in a rural area, so it has much more space compared to urban universities. It is surrounded by many plants, including pear and apple trees, which create a peaceful environment.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，表达清晰且有例子支持。可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: In my view, interest is very important for studying. For example, if I am enthusiastic about a subject, I am more likely to overcome difficulties and stay motivated during boring research or experiments.

× It is comfortable and studying there is enjoyable because of its spacious area with lots of plants, facilities and people.

✓ It is comfortable, and studying there is enjoyable because of its spacious area with lots of plants, facilities, and people.

句子中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。添加逗号可以使句子更通顺。

× because it because it has rich resources about studying materials and well equipped facilities and the most important thing is teacher there is very professional and friendly to help students.

✓ because it has rich resources about study materials and well-equipped facilities, and the most important thing is the teachers there are very professional and friendly to help students.

“studying materials”应改为“study materials”，更符合习惯用法；“teacher”应为复数“teachers”，因为指的是多位老师；“well equipped”应加连字符，构成复合形容词。

× because it because it has rich resources about studying materials and well equipped facilities and the most important thing is teacher there is very professional and friendly to help students.

✓ because it has rich resources about study materials and well-equipped facilities, and the most important thing is the teachers there are very professional and friendly to help students.

“well equipped”作为复合形容词修饰“facilities”，应加连字符。

× such as modern computer labs and 24 hours libraries where people can concentrate on their researching and teachers there are quite professional and friendly to help students.

✓ such as modern computer labs and 24-hour libraries where people can concentrate on their research, and the teachers there are quite professional and friendly to help students.

“24 hours libraries”应改为“24-hour libraries”，作复合形容词使用；“researching”应改为名词“research”；“teachers”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I guess my school is located in the in a rural area so it has a much larger space than other universities in the urban area.

✓ I guess my school is located in a rural area, so it has a much larger space than other universities in urban areas.

“in the in a rural area”重复且错误，应改为“in a rural area”；“in the urban area”改为复数“in urban areas”更符合比较对象的表达。

× And there are lots of plants like pear trees, apple trees surrounded by.

✓ And there are lots of plants like pear trees and apple trees surrounding the area.

原句结构不完整，“surrounded by”后缺少宾语，导致句子不完整，应调整为“surrounding the area”使句子完整通顺。

× if I have enthusiasm about one subject, I will more likely to overcome the difficulties or the boring process of doing research or doing experiments.

✓ if I have enthusiasm about one subject, I will be more likely to overcome the difficulties or the boring process of doing research or doing experiments.

“will more likely to”缺少动词“be”，正确结构是“will be more likely to”。