School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks natural phrasing and coherence. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Also, correct grammar and word choice will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: My school, Rishital Devihar Secondary School, is located in the center of town. It is quite large, especially with a spacious playground. The school colors are white and yellow, which give it a bright and welcoming appearance.

Gợi ý: Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'That's an amazing question.' Focus on directly answering the question with clear and natural sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons and be specific about how the school influences you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school because it offers a good education and helps guide me towards a successful future. For example, my habits have improved since I started studying there, which I believe will benefit me later in life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear due to incorrect word usage like 'UH' and vague phrases. Use precise vocabulary and explain the facilities and activities clearly. Also, avoid repetition and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. My school is a government institution that provides free education and various facilities for children. For instance, it offers transportation services and organizes different extracurricular activities to support students' development.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to contrast the quiet study time with lively events. Be specific about the traditions and activities to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: The environment at my school is usually quiet and peaceful during study hours, with no noise to distract us. However, during school ceremonies, there is a lot of noise and traditional celebrations, including dances and other cultural activities that encourage student participation.

Gợi ý: Avoid informal phrases like 'dear' and focus on a clear, direct answer. Use linking words to explain why interest in study is important and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Interest in studying is very important because it motivates us to learn and helps us achieve our goals. For example, when we are interested, we understand subjects better and can build a successful career in the future.

× My school is located at center area of the town.

✓ My school is located in the central area of the town.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'in' is used to indicate location within an area. Also, 'center area' should be 'central area' to correctly describe the location.

× My school name is Rishital Devihar Secondary School.

✓ My school's name is Rishital Devihar Secondary School.

The possessive form 'school's name' is needed instead of 'My school name' to correctly indicate ownership.

× My school color is in white and yellow.

✓ My school's colors are white and yellow.

The phrase 'color is in white and yellow' is incorrect; 'colors are' is appropriate for multiple colors, and no preposition 'in' is needed.

× it provides me lots of education and right path towards my future.

✓ It provides me with a lot of education and the right path towards my future.

'Lots of education' should be 'a lot of education' and 'provides me' requires the preposition 'with'. Also, 'right path' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Due to my schooling my my habits are changed in right path right way which can be good for my future.

✓ Due to my schooling, my habits have changed in the right way, which can be good for my future.

Repeated 'my' is an error. 'Habits are changed' should be 'habits have changed' to indicate present perfect tense. 'Right path right way' is unclear; 'in the right way' is more appropriate.

× My school is a government UH developed schools institution which offers free education and free facilities for UH children's.

✓ My school is a government-developed institution which offers free education and free facilities for children.

'UH developed schools institution' is unclear; 'government-developed institution' is clearer. 'Children's' is incorrect possessive; it should be 'children'.

× They offer different kind of activities such as UH transportation mode and different types of UH enlargement.

✓ They offer different kinds of activities such as transportation services and various types of enrichment.

'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds'. 'UH transportation mode' and 'UH enlargement' are unclear; likely intended 'transportation services' and 'enrichment' activities.

× The environment are really quiet and peaceful in our school, while in the studying time there are no noise, after that the school ceremony time all all types of noise and tradition are really influenced us to create lot of dance and other activity.

✓ The environment is really quiet and peaceful in our school; during study time there is no noise. After that, during the school ceremony, all types of noise and traditions really influence us to create lots of dance and other activities.

'Environment' is singular, so verb should be 'is'. 'There are no noise' should be 'there is no noise' because 'noise' is uncountable. 'All all' is repeated. 'Influenced us' should be 'influence us' to match present tense. 'Lot of dance and other activity' should be 'lots of dance and other activities'.

× It's a quite good question, dear.

✓ It's quite a good question, dear.

The adverb 'quite' should come before the article 'a' and adjective 'good' to form 'quite a good question'.

× This is really important to any human being to be interested in study because due to the study we can gain lots of beneficial life path to our future, we can generate our life.

✓ This is really important for any human being to be interested in studying because through study we can gain many beneficial life paths for our future; we can improve our lives.

'Important to' should be 'important for'. 'Interested in study' should be 'interested in studying'. 'Due to the study' is better as 'through study'. 'Lots of beneficial life path' should be 'many beneficial life paths'. 'Generate our life' is unclear; 'improve our lives' is more appropriate.