School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, word choice) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences, e.g. say location, usual transport, and a brief comment about commuting.

Ví dụ: My university is in central Tokyo. I usually commute by train, but the morning trains are very crowded, which makes the journey stressful.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then provide one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (stressful → stressed; clarify 'diverse' idea). Keep to 2–3 sentences and mention concrete examples such as assignments and friends.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my university overall. However, I often feel stressed because of heavy coursework and frequent assignments, but I enjoy the social life because I have many good friends and meet students from different countries.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence. Use specific supporting details and correct word choice (e.g. 'technical facilities', 'quiet'). Avoid repetition and hesitations. Link ideas with words like 'for example' or 'also'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my university is a good place to study because it has excellent facilities. For example, the library is quiet and well-equipped, and the faculty includes experienced lecturers in subjects like marketing.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence describing the environment, then add one or two specific details. Use correct phrasing (e.g. 'well-designed', 'quiet and conducive to studying') and link ideas with 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid vague phrases like 'technological level'.

Ví dụ: The campus is well-designed and very quiet, which makes it easy to study. For example, there are modern computer labs and technology facilities, including drones and specialized PCs, that students can use.

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly, then give a reason and an example. Improve grammar (remove extra words, use 'motivation' or 'passion'), and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with specific detail.

Ví dụ: Interest is very important for studying because it motivates students to concentrate and keep learning. For example, when I enjoy a subject I spend more time practicing and my grades improve.

× My school is in Tokyo which is located in the center of Tokyo, so I usually use a train as a transportation to commute to my school but in the morning which is really crowded so I feels so stressful when I'm universe when I'm commuting.

✓ My school is in Tokyo, in the city center, so I usually take the train to commute to school, but the trains in the morning are really crowded, so I feel very stressed when I'm commuting.

Multiple problems: incorrect use of 'as a transportation' and awkward phrasing corrected to 'take the train' (idiomatic). 'There be issue' applies to 'the trains in the morning are really crowded' where plural noun requires correct form. Also 'I feels' is subject-verb agreement (should be 'I feel') and 'so stressful' changed to 'very stressed' to use correct adjective for feelings. Suggestions: use 'take the train' for transportation, match subject and verb number, and use adjective 'stressed' to describe feeling. ID:3

× I feels so stressful when I'm universe when I'm commuting.

✓ I feel very stressed when I'm commuting.

'I feels' is incorrect because the verb must agree with the subject 'I' (use base form 'feel'). 'Stressful' describes a situation, while 'stressed' describes a person's feeling; use 'stressed'. Remove the unrelated word 'universe'. Suggestion: use 'I feel stressed' or 'I feel very stressed'. ID:27

× I like school, but, uh, sometimes I feel so stressful because there are a lot about assignments that I should do, but uh, for, for my friends, there are a lot of good friends in the university and also there are quite diverse universities, so many students from.

✓ I like my school, but sometimes I feel stressed because I have a lot of assignments to do. However, I have many good friends at the university, and the student body is quite diverse, with students from many places.

Fixed articles and plurality: 'a lot about assignments' is incorrect—use 'a lot of assignments' or 'I have a lot of assignments'. 'There are a lot of good friends in the university' should be 'I have many good friends at the university'. 'There are quite diverse universities' is unclear; corrected to 'the student body is quite diverse' and completed the fragment 'from many places'. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' + plural noun, use 'at the university' for location, and complete sentence fragments. ID:1

× I think my school is good place to study because there are many good facilities like technical technology level and library as well.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because there are many good facilities, such as a well-equipped technology lab and a library.

Missing article 'a' before 'good place'. 'technical technology level' is ungrammatical—replaced with 'well-equipped technology lab' for clarity. 'and library as well' corrected to 'and a library'. Suggestion: include articles and choose correct noun phrases for facilities. ID:13

× The library is really quite place, so I can concentrate on my studies very well and for my teacher is good, very, uh, good at the my measure, especially like marketing.

✓ The library is really quiet, so I can concentrate on my studies very well. My teachers are good, especially in subjects like marketing.

'Really quite place' is incorrect order and word choice; changed to 'really quiet'. Sentence was run-on; split into two sentences. 'for my teacher is good' fixed to 'My teachers are good'. 'the my measure' is unclear—interpreted as 'subjects' or 'major'. Suggestion: use adverbs before adjectives ('really quiet') and avoid run-on sentences; choose correct nouns for roles and subjects. ID:20

× The environment is quite designed and well designed and really quiet, so we can really get concentrate on our starting, especially in the technological level which we can use a lot of PC and some other technology like drones.

✓ The environment is well designed and very quiet, so we can really concentrate on our studies, especially in the technology facilities where we can use many PCs and other equipment like drones.

Removed redundant 'quite designed and well designed' and corrected word order. 'get concentrate on our starting' is ungrammatical; replaced with 'concentrate on our studies'. 'technological level' changed to 'technology facilities' and 'a lot of PC' corrected to 'many PCs'. Suggestion: avoid redundant adjectives, use correct collocations ('concentrate on studies'), and pluralize countable nouns. ID:26

× I think interest is really important for in the for studying because without interest we cannot concentrate on and focus on our studies and we can, we don't have passion about it.

✓ I think interest is really important for studying because without interest we cannot concentrate on or focus on our studies, and we won't have passion for them.

Removed extra prepositions 'for in the for'; correct collocation is 'important for studying'. Use 'concentrate on or focus on' to connect two verbs. 'Have passion about it' corrected to 'have passion for them' (passion for studies). Suggestion: use correct prepositional phrases and coordinate verbs with 'or' or 'and' appropriately. ID:11