School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 简洁化回答并避免犹豫词，直接给出地点并补充一两条具体信息。注意句子语法与词序，例如去掉多余的冠词和重复表达。

Ví dụ: My school is in Zhuhai, a beautiful coastal city in Guangdong province. It’s near the waterfront and about a twenty-minute bus ride from my home, which makes it very convenient.

Gợi ý: 用一个明确的主题句表达喜欢与否，然后用一到两条具体理由支持，避免重复和填充词，并注意主谓一致和代词使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school because it has excellent facilities such as modern classrooms and a well-equipped sports center. In addition, there are small parks and a lake on campus where students can relax between classes.

Gợi ý: 回答要直接并用连词连贯理由，提供具体细节（例如图书数量、开放时间或自习室特点），并注意语法（主谓一致与形容词使用）。减少停顿词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it is. The school has a large library with many study rooms and thousands of books, and there are computer labs available for research and assignments, which makes studying very efficient.

Gợi ý: 用一到两句清晰描述环境，使用准确词汇（trees, flowers, campus, park），并给出具体场景或感受，避免句子碎片和重复。

Ví dụ: The campus environment is pleasant and green, with many trees and flower beds throughout. There is also a small park and a lake where I often sit to relax when I feel tired from studying.

Gợi ý: 直接陈述观点并用因果结构展开，避免不清楚或无意义的词（例如“MA”），并提供具体结果或例子来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Interest is very important because it motivates you to study consistently. For example, when I enjoy a subject I spend more time practicing and usually achieve better grades as a result.

× My school is located in the Zhuhai, uh, beautiful coastal city in Guangdong province.

✓ My school is located in Zhuhai, a beautiful coastal city in Guangdong province.

原句中不需要定冠词“the”在专有地名前（the Zhuhai 不正确），且需要使用不定冠词“a”引入后置定语“beautiful coastal city”。建议：地名前一般不加冠词；当用名词短语对地名进行描述时，用不定冠词引出。

× I think it's a comfortable place where my school located.

✓ I think it's a comfortable place where my school is located.

缺少系动词“is”，导致句子缺乏谓语。建议：在定语从句中保持主语和谓语，use 'is located'。

× Certainly, yes, our school have some have so many excellent facilities and it's good for students to study there.

✓ Certainly, yes, our school has so many excellent facilities and it's good for students to study there.

主语是单数名词短语“our school”，谓语应使用单数形式“has”而非“have”。此外多余的“have”应删除。建议：注意主语单复数与动词一致，删除重复词。

× And there are also some, uh, parks and uh, lakes, umm, we can, uh, relax our, uh, relax myself.

✓ And there are also some parks and lakes where we can relax.

原句使用了错误的反身代词组合“relax our, relax myself”，且句子结构混乱。应使用一般动词“relax”及适当的关系词连接。建议：不用反身代词，直接用主语加动词；如果表示“我们”，用we。

× Yes, it's really a good place to study, umm, because uh, my school have a so big library and it contains so many rooms for students to study themselves, and there are also some uh, computers to help us.

✓ Yes, it's really a good place to study because my school has a very large library, and it contains many rooms for students to study in. There are also some computers to help us.

主语“my school”为单数，应使用“has”。“a so big”是不正确的词序，应改为“a very large”或“so large”。“study themselves”用法不当，应该说“study in”或“study by themselves”（若强调独立学习）。建议：注意主谓一致、形容词位置和固定搭配。

× It's pretty well, umm, there are many trees in the flowers in my school and there are so, uh, park located in my compass and uh, a lake and I will sit by the lake uh, when I am tired in the study.

✓ It's pretty good. There are many trees and flowers at my school, and there is a park on my campus and a lake. I sit by the lake when I am tired from studying.

多个介词使用不当：应为 “pretty good” 而不是“pretty well”（well 用作副词）；“trees and flowers” 不应用“in”；校园是“campus”拼写错误；“located in my compass” 不通；表达“因学习疲倦”应为“tired from studying”。建议：区分形容词/副词，使用正确介词（at/in/on/from），注意拼写。

× I think it's so important for me because if you don't have interest in study, you will not have the passion.

✓ I think it's very important for me because if you don't have an interest in studying, you will not have the passion.

代词/冠词和动名词使用问题：应使用不定冠词“an interest”并将“study”改为动名词“studying”。建议：兴趣前加冠词，动词做名词时用 -ing 形式。

× If you have the interest, it will make your own efforts to do that and MA and gather good grades.

✓ If you have interest, you will make your own efforts to do that and get good grades.

原句结构混乱，“it will make your own efforts” 表达错误，且出现不明词“MA”。应改为主语直接展开结果“you will make... and get...”。建议：保持主语一致，使用正确动词短语（make efforts, get good grades）。