School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the location, avoid filler words, and keep it short (1–2 sentences). If needed, add one specific detail (e.g., how long it takes to get there) using a linking word.

Ví dụ: My school is near my house — it takes me about ten minutes to walk there.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer, then add one or two clear supporting reasons. Use linking words (because, and, also) and avoid repetition. Keep the total to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like my school because it helps me learn new things and I can talk with supportive teachers. Also, I enjoy meeting friends there, which makes studying more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize supporting points with linking words (first, also). Be careful with grammar (e.g., 'a good place to study', 'quiet environment') and avoid repeating phrases. Provide one or two specific examples of facilities or features.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a good place to study. Firstly, it has a quiet environment that helps concentration, and secondly, there are well-equipped labs for both theory and practical work.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence describing the environment, then give a concrete reason or example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: The environment at my school is calm and quiet, which makes it easy to concentrate. For example, students usually study in silence in the library and classrooms.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a reason and a brief personal example. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid repetition and hesitations. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Ví dụ: I think interest is very important in studying because it motivates you to learn and explore topics more deeply. For example, because I enjoy learning, I spend extra time practising and improving my skills.

× My school has, uh, close to my house.

✓ My school is close to my house.

The verb 'has' is incorrect here; the correct copula is 'is' to describe location. Also the article 'my' before 'school' is fine. Use 'is close to' to indicate proximity. Suggestion: Use 'is' with location expressions (e.g., 'My school is near my house').

× Yes, of course. I love my school so where I can enhance my knowledge, so where I can get together with my friends, communicate with the teachers as well as my friends and new people.

✓ Yes, of course. I love my school because I can enhance my knowledge, meet my friends, and communicate with teachers and new people.

The sentence contained incorrect use of 'so where' and repetition that breaks sentence structure. Replace 'so where' with 'because' to give a reason. Use parallel structure for the list of activities (enhance my knowledge, meet my friends, and communicate with teachers and new people). Avoid repetition of 'my friends'. Suggestion: Use 'because' for reasons and keep parallel verb forms.

× Yes, yes, my school is good place for study first and foremost thing it is quite environment in my school and there are a different kind of labs, practice lab, theory lab, so people can students can easily enhance their knowledge as well as.

✓ Yes, my school is a good place to study. First and foremost, the environment at my school is quiet, and there are different kinds of labs, such as practice labs and theory labs, so students can easily enhance their knowledge.

Missing articles: 'a good place' and 'a quiet environment' needed articles. 'for study' should be 'to study'. 'there are a different kind of labs' is incorrect; use 'different kinds of labs' or 'a variety of labs'. Remove redundant words and fix plural agreement ('labs' and 'students'). Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns and correct plural forms.

× I like mostly I like it has a quiet atmosphere so I like in my school.

✓ I mostly like it because my school has a quiet atmosphere.

The original sentence repeats 'I like' and has incorrect word order. Use 'mostly' before the verb or phrase it as 'I mostly like it' and connect with 'because' to give the reason. 'Has a quiet atmosphere' correctly describes the environment. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use conjunctions to link ideas.

× In my perspective, it's very important is interest in study.

✓ From my perspective, interest in studying is very important.

'In my perspective' is less natural than 'From my perspective'. The phrase 'is interest in study' is ungrammatical; use 'interest in studying' or 'interest in your studies'. Place 'is very important' after the subject 'interest in studying'. Suggestion: Use correct noun/gerund forms ('studying' or 'studies') and natural prepositional phrases.

× If you do not have interest in your study, so you can not, you cannot explore the things, you cannot gain your knowledge.

✓ If you do not have an interest in your studies, you cannot explore things or gain knowledge.

Do not combine 'if' with 'so'—use one conjunction. Add the article 'an' before 'interest' and use the plural 'studies'. 'Can not' should be 'cannot'. Simplify the list using 'or' for alternatives and remove unnecessary 'your'. Suggestion: Use 'cannot' as one word and avoid redundant conjunctions.

× So if you for example, umm, I have a lot of interest in study, so I can easily enhance, improve my skills and.

✓ For example, I have a strong interest in studying, so I can easily enhance and improve my skills.

The sentence mixes conditional 'if' with 'for example' incorrectly and has filler words. Use 'For example' to introduce a personal example. 'Interest in study' should be 'interest in studying' or 'interest in my studies'. Complete the sentence by finishing the list 'enhance and improve my skills.' Suggestion: Remove fillers, choose one discourse marker ('For example'), and finish the coordinated verbs.