School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify location and avoid unrelated or incorrect phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the school location, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences concise and remove odd expressions like "assignment to Jupiter."

Ví dụ: My school is located in South Jakarta, in a popular residential area. Because it is close to several malls and restaurants, many students often meet friends there after classes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear reason and use better grammar and vocabulary. Use one or two linking words (for example, "also" or "because") and avoid fillers like "umm." Limit to maximum five sentences and be specific about facilities or programs.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school a lot because it offers excellent facilities and strong academic programs. Also, it has many extracurricular activities such as a competitive basketball team and well-equipped science labs.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence and support with a specific example. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement) and use linking words like "for example" appropriately. Keep it natural and coherent within two to three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the school offers flexible academic arrangements for student-athletes. For example, athletes are allowed to train in the morning and attend classes afterward so they can balance sports and studies.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence describing the environment, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar ("surroundings" and verb forms) and avoid vague praise—give examples of how teachers support students.

Ví dụ: The school environment is friendly and supportive. For instance, teachers offer extra help after class and organize group activities that make new students feel welcome.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence explaining why interest matters, then give one specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and awkward phrases like "business schedule"—use clearer terms such as "busy schedule."

Ví dụ: Interest in studying is very important because it motivates you to keep learning, especially when you have a busy schedule. Without interest, you are less likely to review material or complete assignments, so your performance can suffer.

× My school is in assignment to Jupiter.

✓ My school is in the Assignment to Jupiter area.

The original uses incorrect preposition and word order: 'in assignment to Jupiter' is ungrammatical. Use 'in' + place and a noun phrase for area names. Capitalize proper noun 'Assignment to Jupiter' if it's a place name and add 'area' for clarity.

× It is a quite popular public school in South Jakarta and the location of the school is very strategic for us students to go to the malls, hang out with friends after school because there is a lot of popular restaurants to try.

✓ It is quite a popular public school in South Jakarta, and its location is very convenient for students to go to malls and hang out with friends after school because there are a lot of popular restaurants to try.

Use 'quite a popular' not 'a quite popular'. Replace 'the location of the school is very strategic for us students' with 'its location is very convenient for students' for natural English. Use plural agreement 'there are a lot of restaurants' not 'there is' when referring to countable plural 'restaurants'.

× Yes, I do like my school a lot, not only because of its strategic area but also because the facility that they offered for our students to use it and they have amazing academic programs and umm non academic programs such as sports like basketball.

✓ Yes, I like my school a lot, not only because of its convenient location but also because of the facilities they offer for students and their great academic and non-academic programs, such as sports like basketball.

Use 'I like' rather than 'I do like' for simple affirmation. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' and 'that they offered for our students to use it' is incorrect: use 'they offer for students'. Match pronouns and verbs: 'they offer' and 'their programs'. Remove redundant 'umm' and streamline phrase order.

× Yes, I do think my school is a good place to study because they have a flexible academic programs and could support certain athletes that go to school there.

✓ Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has flexible academic programs and can support certain student athletes who study there.

Use 'I think' rather than 'I do think' for normal response. 'They have' is ambiguous for school (use 'it has') and 'a flexible academic programs' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural 'programs'. Use modal 'can' for ability and 'student athletes who study there' is clearer than 'athletes that go to school there'.

× For example, when we have a morning practices, they allowed us to do our morning practices and go to school after we finish.

✓ For example, when we had morning practices, they allowed us to practice in the morning and go to school after we finished.

Tense must be consistent: use past 'had' and 'finished' to match 'allowed'. Also plural agreement: 'a morning practices' is incorrect; use 'morning practices' or 'a morning practice'. Use parallel verbs 'practice' and 'go'.

× The environment is very nice, it has such a friendly surroundings.

✓ The environment is very nice; it has such friendly surroundings.

'A friendly surroundings' is incorrect because 'surroundings' is plural, so remove 'a' and use 'such friendly surroundings'. Also avoid comma splice by using semicolon or separate sentences.

× The teachers supported us through our journey in high school.

✓ The teachers support us through our journey in high school.

If speaking about ongoing support currently provided, use present tense 'support' instead of past 'supported'. If referring to past, keep past tense but align context. Choose present for general statement.

× How important is interest in study?

✓ How important is interest in studying?

Use the gerund 'studying' after 'interest in' to form the correct noun phrase. Alternatively, 'interest in study' needs an article 'the' ('interest in the study') but 'interest in studying' is more natural.

× For me, it's really important, especially if someone has a business schedule.

✓ For me, it's really important, especially if someone has a busy schedule.

'Business schedule' is awkward; use adjective 'busy' to describe a schedule. This corrects word choice rather than grammar category but fits pronoun/word use corrections.

× If you don't have interest in study, you will not start making improvement to your study because you won't do anything with your study.

✓ If you don't have an interest in studying, you will not start making improvements in your studies because you won't do anything to improve them.

Add article 'an' with 'interest' and use 'studying' gerund. Use plural 'improvements' and 'studies' or 'your studying'. 'Do anything with your study' is awkward; use 'do anything to improve them' for clarity and correct verb phrase.