School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and directly answer the question about location first (e.g. town or area). Use one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g. "taught me different kinds of skills" and "helped me learn how to behave with others").

Ví dụ: My primary school was in my hometown, at Guhaguan Public School. It was a small school near the market, and there I learned academic subjects and social skills like teamwork and respect for others.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer (Yes/No/Partly) then give a concise reason using linking words (e.g. "However, now..."). Improve grammar and verb tenses ("I did not have the habit of waking up early", "when I'm free I check photos and updates"). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. At the time I disliked waking up early, but now I miss school life; for example, when I am free I often look at old photos and chat with classmates about school memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific supporting points, using linking words (e.g. "because" or "for example"). Correct grammar and collocations ("teachers taught us many subjects"; "discipline") and avoid vague phrases like "so many things."

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. It was a good place to study because teachers taught core subjects like arithmetic and also emphasised discipline and good manners, which helped me in school and later in life.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and coherently: one sentence describing the environment, then one specific detail or example. Fix unclear fragments and sentence structure (e.g. explain proximity to the Sikh temple clearly). Avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: The school environment was very peaceful. For example, it was located near a Sikh temple and a quiet residential area, so there was little traffic noise and a calm atmosphere for studying.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion statement and then two concise reasons with examples. Improve grammar and vocabulary: use "interest in studying" or "motivation" and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: Interest in studying is very important because it helps you concentrate and learn deeply. For example, a motivated student will spend more time practising difficult topics and is more likely to get good grades and career opportunities.

× I completed my primary education in my hometown school.

✓ I completed my primary education at my hometown school.

Use the preposition 'at' for institutions/places where activities occur; 'in' is less natural here. Also this fits the context of where education was completed.

× My school name was Guhaguan Public School.

✓ My school's name was Guhaguan Public School.

Use the possessive form 'school's name' or add the definite article 'The name of my school was...'. The original lacks the possessive marker, which is required in English.

× I really miss my school because my school taught me different kind of skills as well as also help me to have people behave with others for so many kind of things.

✓ I really miss my school because it taught me different kinds of skills and also helped me learn how to behave with other people in many situations.

Issues: plural of 'kind' (should be 'kinds'), verb tense/agreement ('taught' and 'helped' for past), pronoun use ('my school' repeated; use 'it'), and awkward phrasing 'have people behave with others' corrected to 'learn how to behave with other people'. Use 'many situations' instead of 'so many kind of things'.

× When I was young, I didn't like school too much because I do not have a habit to wake up early in the morning.

✓ When I was young, I didn't like school very much because I did not have the habit of waking up early in the morning.

Maintain past tense ('did not have') to match 'When I was young' and 'didn't like'. Use 'the habit of waking up' (gerund after 'habit of'). Replace 'too much' with 'very much' for naturalness.

× But nowadays I really miss my school days.

✓ But nowadays I really miss my school days.

Sentence is correct. Present-tense 'miss' is appropriate for a current feeling about past days; no correction needed.

× Sometimes when I have a free, I usually check the photos, new updates about the school days with my friends.

✓ Sometimes when I have free time, I usually check photos and updates about school days with my friends.

'a free' is incorrect; use 'free time'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'photos' and 'new' is redundant with 'updates'; streamline to 'photos and updates'.

× Yes, definitely.

✓ Yes, definitely.

Sentence is correct and needs no change; it appropriately answers the question.

× My school is a very good place to study even if the teacher taught us different kind of things such as arithmetic, good manners, how to live in a disciplined life and so many things which really plays an important role nowadays.

✓ My school was a very good place to study because the teachers taught us different kinds of things such as arithmetic, good manners, how to live a disciplined life, and many other things that play an important role today.

Corrections: plural 'kinds', plural 'teachers' if referring to more than one, past tense 'was' if speaking about past school, verb agreement 'that play' (plural), replace 'so many things' with 'many other things', and 'nowadays' to 'today' for concision. Also 'how to live a disciplined life' is more natural.

× If I talk about environment, my school environment is very peaceful.

✓ If I talk about the environment, my school's environment is very peaceful.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'environment' and use possessive 'school's environment' for natural English.

× I really like my school place because it's really because it's near to us. Sikh temple.

✓ I really like my school because it is very close to us and near the Sikh temple.

Original has repetition 'because it's really because' and fragment 'Sikh temple.' Combine into one sentence, remove 'place' (unnecessary), use 'close to us' and 'near the Sikh temple' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Interest is very important in studies and if we didn't show any interest in studies, we can't focus on a particular subject or any other subject.

✓ Interest is very important in studies, and if we do not show any interest, we cannot focus on a particular subject or any other subject.

Change past 'didn't' to present 'do not' to match general statement, change contraction 'can't' to 'cannot' for formality (optional), and remove redundant 'in studies' second time. Maintain present tense for general truths.

× Firstly, people have to build the interesting studies if they want to make a good career in the future.

✓ Firstly, people have to develop an interest in their studies if they want to build a good career in the future.

'Build the interesting studies' is ungrammatical. Use 'develop an interest in their studies' and 'build a good career' or 'pursue a good career' for natural collocations.

× If as well as if they want to do a job in the future, they have to show in the.

✓ If they want to get a job in the future, they have to show interest and skills.

Original is a fragment with redundant 'if as well as if' and ends abruptly. Complete the idea with 'show interest and skills' to explain what is needed to obtain a job.