Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm a student studying the. Chinese University.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I study in the University of Beijing, China.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes, Beijing is the capital of China. Is provide many opportunities and the study resource for student. And. Sir. Many famous teacher.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to study in the library. And I think library should to make some changes, for example. Eight more seats and. Make the. Environment more quiet.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
I plan to improve my study. And I should practice more times. I plan to. Achieves lessons about my. Major.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和不完整的句子,表达应更自然流畅。可以直接说“I am a student at a Chinese university.”
Ví dụ: I am a student at a Chinese university, where I am currently pursuing my degree.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短且有语法错误,建议使用更自然的表达,如“I study at Beijing University in China.”
Ví dụ: I study at Beijing University in China, which is known for its excellent academic programs.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,建议使用连贯的句子并提供具体细节,如“Beijing offers many opportunities and excellent study resources, with many famous teachers.”
Ví dụ: Yes, Beijing is a great place to study because it offers many opportunities and excellent resources, including experienced and famous teachers.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误,建议使用连贯句子并具体说明改进建议,如“the library should add more seats and create a quieter environment.”
Ví dụ: Yes, I like studying in the library, but I think it should add more seats and make the environment quieter to help students concentrate better.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清且有语法错误,建议用连贯句子具体说明计划,如“I plan to improve my studies by practicing more and taking advanced courses in my major.”
Ví dụ: I plan to improve my studies by practicing more regularly and taking advanced courses related to my major to deepen my knowledge.
× I'm a student studying the. Chinese University.
✓ I'm a student studying at the Chinese University.
句中“the. Chinese University”中的“the”后不应有句号,且应加介词“at”表示在某大学学习。文章错误导致句子不通顺。
× I study in the University of Beijing, China.
✓ I study at the University of Beijing, China.
英语中表示在大学学习通常用介词“at”,而非“in”。使用错误的介词会导致表达不准确。
× Yes, Beijing is the capital of China. Is provide many opportunities and the study resource for student. And. Sir. Many famous teacher.
✓ Yes, Beijing is the capital of China. It provides many opportunities and study resources for students. And there are many famous teachers.
原句缺少主语“it”,动词形式错误,应为“provides”;“study resource”应为复数“study resources”;“student”应为复数“students”;“And. Sir.”无意义,应改为“there are”;“teacher”应为复数“teachers”。句子结构混乱,需调整。
× And I think library should to make some changes, for example. Eight more seats and. Make the. Environment more quiet.
✓ And I think the library should make some changes, for example, add more seats and make the environment quieter.
情态动词“should”后不加“to”,应直接接动词原形“make”;“Eight more seats”应为“add more seats”;“more quiet”应为比较级“quieter”。句子表达不规范。
× I plan to improve my study. And I should practice more times.
✓ I plan to improve my studies. And I should practice more often.
“study”应为复数“studies”表示学习内容;“practice more times”表达不自然,应改为“practice more often”表示更频繁地练习。
× I plan to. Achieves lessons about my. Major.
✓ I plan to achieve lessons about my major.
“achieves”是动词第三人称单数形式,前面有“to”应接动词原形“achieve”;句中多余的句号应去掉。