Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tense and prepositions, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I have recently completed my HSC examination" and "I am preparing for IELTS to pursue higher education abroad."

Ví dụ: I have recently completed my HSC examination. Currently, I am preparing for the IELTS exam because I want to pursue higher education abroad and explore international opportunities.

Gợi ý: Your answer has repetition and some grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, try to connect ideas smoothly using linking words like "and" or "so."

Ví dụ: I am currently studying at RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering. However, I want to pursue higher education abroad, so I am preparing for the IELTS exam at Pasha School in Naranganj.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but some sentences are awkward and contain errors. Use correct expressions like "there is no disturbance" and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because there is no disturbance, and it is always clean and well maintained. This environment helps me concentrate better, and I love the place because it is surrounded by natural beauty.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary. For example, say "there are not many benches" and "sometimes electricity problems disturb our studies, so I think they should install a generator."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like some changes at my study place. For instance, there are not many benches for studying, and sometimes electricity problems disturb our studies. Therefore, I think they should install a generator to solve this issue.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and spelling errors. Use correct verb forms and spellings, and connect ideas logically. For example, say "I am currently studying" and "I aspire to pursue higher education to gain international exposure."

Ví dụ: I am currently studying at RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering. However, I aspire to pursue higher education abroad to gain international exposure and better opportunities. At the moment, I am preparing for the IELTS examination at Pasha School in Naranganj to achieve this goal.

× I am a student and recently I have completed my HSC examination.

✓ I am a student and recently I completed my HSC examination.

The present perfect tense 'have completed' is not appropriate here because the action is completed recently and the speaker is referring to a specific past event. In Bangladesh English, simple past tense is preferred for completed actions with a definite time.

× Now I took IELTS preparation for higher education in abroad and I want to explore international facilities.

✓ Now I am taking IELTS preparation for higher education abroad and I want to explore international facilities.

The verb 'took' is past tense but the action is ongoing, so present continuous 'am taking' is correct. Also, 'in abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not need a preposition. In Bangladesh English, use present continuous for ongoing actions and omit 'in' before 'abroad'.

× Recently I study in RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering, but I want to go abroad for my higher education and now I am preparing for preparing for my IELTS examination in Pasha School, Naranganj.

✓ Recently I have been studying at RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering, but I want to go abroad for my higher education and now I am preparing for my IELTS examination at Pasha School, Naranganj.

The simple present 'study' is incorrect for recent ongoing action; present perfect continuous 'have been studying' is better. Also, 'in' should be 'at' for institutions. The repeated phrase 'preparing for preparing for' is a mistake. In Bangladesh English, use present perfect continuous for recent ongoing actions and correct prepositions for places.

× Recently I study in RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering, but I want to go abroad for my higher education and now I am preparing for preparing for my IELTS examination in Pasha School, Naranganj.

✓ Recently I have been studying at RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering, but I want to go abroad for my higher education and now I am preparing for my IELTS examination at Pasha School, Naranganj.

Use 'at' instead of 'in' when referring to universities and schools. In Bangladesh English, 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions.

× Yes, it is a good place to study because it has no disturbance and it was always clean and well maintained.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because there is no disturbance and it is always clean and well maintained.

'Has no disturbance' is unnatural; 'there is no disturbance' is correct. Also, tense consistency requires 'is always clean' instead of 'was always clean' since the place is still good. In Bangladesh English, use 'there is' for existence and maintain present tense for ongoing states.

× That gives me much more attention to focus my study and I always love that place because it is full of nature natural beauties.

✓ That helps me pay more attention to focus on my studies and I always love that place because it is full of natural beauty.

'Gives me much more attention' is incorrect; 'helps me pay more attention' is better. 'Focus my study' should be 'focus on my studies'. 'Nature natural beauties' is redundant; 'natural beauty' is correct. In Bangladesh English, use correct collocations and avoid redundancy.

× Yes I would like the place where I study to make many changes like there have no many benches for studies and sometimes the electricity disturb our studies so I think I I generate a generator.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make many changes like there are not many benches for studying and sometimes the electricity disturbs our studies so I think I should get a generator.

'There have no many benches' is incorrect; correct is 'there are not many benches'. 'Electricity disturb' needs third person singular verb 'disturbs'. 'I I generate a generator' is incorrect; 'I should get a generator' is appropriate. In Bangladesh English, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct modal verb usage.

× I am currently study in RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering.

✓ I am currently studying at RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering.

Use present continuous 'am studying' for ongoing action. Also, 'in' should be 'at' for institutions. In Bangladesh English, present continuous is used for current activities and 'at' is the correct preposition for places of study.

× I am currently study in RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering.

✓ I am currently studying at RP Shah University in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering.

Use 'at' instead of 'in' when referring to universities. In Bangladesh English, 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions.

× However, I aspire to purse my higher education effort to gain international exposure and better opportunities.

✓ However, I aspire to pursue my higher education in order to gain international exposure and better opportunities.

'Purse' is a spelling error; correct is 'pursue'. Also, 'effort' is misplaced; 'in order to' expresses purpose better. In Bangladesh English, correct spelling and proper phrase usage are important.

× At the moment, I'm preparing for ILDS examination at Vashi School in Narayan to help me achieve this goal.

✓ At the moment, I'm preparing for the IELTS examination at Pasha School in Naranganj to help me achieve this goal.

'ILDS' is a typo; correct is 'IELTS'. 'Vashi School in Narayan' is inconsistent with earlier 'Pasha School, Naranganj'. Correct names and places should be used. Also, 'the' is needed before 'IELTS examination'. In Bangladesh English, correct names and articles are important for clarity.