Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same information. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say: "I am currently a student at RP Shah University, studying Computer Science and Engineering. I recently completed my HSC exam and am preparing for IELTS because I want to study abroad."

Ví dụ: I am currently a student at RP Shah University, studying Computer Science and Engineering. I recently completed my HSC exam and am preparing for IELTS because I want to study abroad.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but slightly repetitive with the previous one. Try to focus directly on the question and add some specific details about your university or course to enrich your answer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I study Computer Science and Engineering at RP Shah University in Narayanganj. The university has good facilities and experienced teachers, which help me learn effectively. Moreover, I am preparing for IELTS to continue my studies abroad.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and repetition. Also, the content is quite general. Try to use correct grammar, avoid repeating phrases, and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Harpisha University is a well-reputed institution in Bangladesh. It is a good place to study because it offers many opportunities to focus on academics. For example, the university has a large library that helps students gain knowledge.

Gợi ý: Your answer is mostly clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the ideas more connected. Also, be specific about the changes you want. Use linking words like 'however' or 'in addition' to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Artesia University is a well-reputed institution in Bangladesh and provides a peaceful environment for studying. However, I would like the university to build a bigger library to help students access more resources.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and vague. Try to be more specific about your future plans and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating information already mentioned.

Ví dụ: After completing my current studies in Computer Science and Engineering at RP Shah University, I plan to pursue higher education abroad. This will allow me to gain international experience and broaden my knowledge.

× I am a student and recently I have completed my HSC examination and now I am studying in RP Shah University, Narayan College and the department is Computer Science and Engineering and I want to study abroad so that's why I took preparation IELTS.

✓ I am a student and recently I completed my HSC examination. Now I am studying at RP Shah University, Narayan College in the Department of Computer Science and Engineering. I want to study abroad, so that is why I am preparing for the IELTS.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present perfect ('have completed') with present continuous and past tense ('took preparation'). The phrase 'took preparation IELTS' is incorrect; it should be 'preparing for the IELTS'. Also, 'studying in RP Shah University' should be 'studying at RP Shah University'. Use simple past 'completed' for a recent finished action and present continuous 'am preparing' for ongoing action.

× I'm currently a student and I recently completed my HSC examination. Now I'm studying computer science and engineering at RP Shah University in Naranj. I'm preparing for the IELTS exam because I hope to pursue my higher education abroad in the near future.

✓ I'm currently a student and I recently completed my HSC examination. Now I'm studying Computer Science and Engineering at RP Shah University in Narayan. I'm preparing for the IELTS exam because I hope to pursue my higher education abroad in the near future.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'Naranj' is likely a typo for 'Narayan'. Also, 'computer science and engineering' should be capitalized as it is a department name. No grammar errors otherwise.

× Harpisha University has a well reputed university in Bangladesh. I think it is a very good place to study because because there are lot of opportunities to focus my studies. There have a library that helps us to gain knowledge and I think it is a very good place to study.

✓ Harpisha University is a well-reputed university in Bangladesh. I think it is a very good place to study because there are lots of opportunities to focus on my studies. There is a library that helps us gain knowledge, and I think it is a very good place to study.

'Harpisha University has a well reputed university' is incorrect; a university cannot have another university. Use 'is a well-reputed university'. 'There have a library' is incorrect; correct form is 'There is a library'. Also, 'lot of opportunities' should be 'lots of opportunities' or 'a lot of opportunities'. 'Focus my studies' should be 'focus on my studies'.

× Artesia University is well reputed institution in Bangladesh. I think it is a great place to study because it offers many opportunities to focus on my studies. But I think I want to set up a big library that helps students gain knowledge. Additionally, the university provides a peaceful environment.

✓ Artesia University is a well-reputed institution in Bangladesh. I think it is a great place to study because it offers many opportunities to focus on my studies. But I think it should set up a bigger library that helps students gain knowledge. Additionally, the university provides a peaceful environment.

Missing article 'a' before 'well-reputed institution'. 'I want to set up a big library' is awkward; better to say 'it should set up a bigger library' to express the university's improvement. 'Big' can be replaced with 'bigger' to imply improvement.

× Recently I have completed my HSC examination and now I am a student at the RP Shah University. The department is Computer Science and Engineering, but I want to study abroad for higher education because I want to explore international things.

✓ Recently I completed my HSC examination and now I am a student at RP Shah University. The department is Computer Science and Engineering, but I want to study abroad for higher education because I want to explore international opportunities.

Use simple past 'completed' for a finished action. 'The RP Shah University' should be 'RP Shah University' without 'the'. 'Explore international things' is vague; better to say 'explore international opportunities'.