Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and simplifying complex phrases. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I am currently working full-time as an auditor at the Federal Board of Revenue. My job involves auditing taxpayers, mainly focusing on sales and income tax.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Avoid repeating phrases like 'as I said earlier' and use proper prepositions. Also, specify your intentions more smoothly.

Ví dụ: I'm not studying at the moment, but I plan to pursue a master's degree in Applied Accountancy in Europe, possibly in Italy or the Netherlands.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains some hesitations and minor grammar errors. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with singular/plural forms and article usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, Europe is a popular destination for students because it offers world-class education and top-ranked universities. Studying for my master's in Italy or the Netherlands would greatly benefit my career.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. Try to organize your ideas better, avoid redundancy, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: I don't want many changes, but the student library could be improved. It is often overcrowded, and seating is limited, so students, including myself, sometimes have to wait 15 to 20 minutes to find a seat.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, and use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in Applied Accountancy or Finance because it will help advance my career. This field is closely related to my current job as an auditor, so it aligns well with my goals.

× I'm looking forward to do masters in Applied Accountancy at somewhere in Europe, maybe in Italy or Netherlands.

✓ I'm looking forward to doing a master's in Applied Accountancy somewhere in Europe, maybe in Italy or the Netherlands.

The phrase 'look forward to' is followed by a verb in the -ing form, so 'do' should be corrected to 'doing'. Also, 'masters' should be 'a master's' to indicate the degree, and 'somewhere in Europe' is more natural without 'at'. Additionally, 'the Netherlands' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I think Europe is one of the most popular student destination because of its world class education and uh like top ranked universities.

✓ I think Europe is one of the most popular student destinations because of its world-class education and top-ranked universities.

'Destination' should be plural 'destinations' to agree with 'one of the most'. 'World class' and 'top ranked' should be hyphenated as compound adjectives: 'world-class' and 'top-ranked'.

× And I think it would be great for my career to study in masters at Italy or Netherlands.

✓ And I think it would be great for my career to study for a master's in Italy or the Netherlands.

'Masters' should be 'a master's' to indicate the degree. Also, 'at Italy or Netherlands' should be 'in Italy or the Netherlands' with the definite article 'the' before 'Netherlands'.

× Library is very congested at my institute and I think the sitting space should be expanded because I used to wait for a seat in library for 15 to 20 minutes and there are many students who are waiting outside since there's.

✓ The library is very congested at my institute, and I think the seating space should be expanded because I have to wait for a seat in the library for 15 to 20 minutes, and many students are waiting outside because of this.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'The' before 'library'. 'Sitting space' should be 'seating space'. 'Used to wait' implies past habit, but the context suggests a current situation, so 'have to wait' is better. The sentence ends abruptly with 'since there's', which is incomplete; it is corrected to 'because of this' to complete the thought.

× Library is very congested at my institute and I think the sitting space should be expanded because I used to wait for a seat in library for 15 to 20 minutes and there are many students who are waiting outside since there's.

✓ The library is very congested at my institute, and I think the seating space should be expanded because I have to wait for a seat in the library for 15 to 20 minutes, and many students are waiting outside because of this.

Repeated correction for clarity: 'The library' requires the definite article. 'Sitting space' should be 'seating space'. 'Used to wait' is past tense but the situation is current, so 'have to wait' is appropriate. The sentence was incomplete and is now completed properly.

× Well in future my plan is to do masters in applied accountancy or in field of finance because I think it it can greatly help in excelling my career and it is highly relevant to my the current job which I'm doing being auditor so it perfectly aligns with my goals.

✓ Well, in the future, my plan is to do a master's in Applied Accountancy or in the field of Finance because I think it can greatly help me excel in my career, and it is highly relevant to my current job as an auditor, so it perfectly aligns with my goals.

'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'Masters' should be 'a master's'. 'In field of finance' should be 'in the field of Finance'. 'Excelling my career' is incorrect; it should be 'help me excel in my career'. 'My the current job' has an extra article 'the' which should be removed. 'Being auditor' should be 'as an auditor'.