Study— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm a student, no, I mean 11th grade on Senior High School in Siracho because I live in Indonesia and I like study, of course.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I prefer to study in home because I feel it's more relaxed and we can take a break whatever we want. And it free for other distraction so it.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think. Good place to study in library because it quiet it feel more quiet that can ask more focus and relax and.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Uh, maybe I prefer Eat Cafe because cafe eats feel it, feel more tear, and we can enjoy our study with happy. It's not bad.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
My future study plans is in a Basel degree. I really want to be a manager when business, a businesswoman that can have any bruising. In Indonesia.
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Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih langsung dan alami. Gunakan kalimat topik singkat yang menjawab pertanyaan terlebih dahulu, lalu beri detail tambahan secara jelas dan ringkas. Perhatikan tata bahasa (tense, preposisi) dan hilangkan pengulangan seperti 'no, I mean' yang membuatnya terdengar ragu.
Ví dụ: I'm a student. I'm in the 11th grade at Siracho Senior High School in Indonesia. I enjoy studying and learning new subjects.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Buka dengan kalimat topik tegas lalu jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang koheren menggunakan kata penghubung sederhana. Perbaiki frasa seperti 'in home' menjadi 'at home' dan hindari kalimat tidak lengkap seperti akhir jawaban.
Ví dụ: I prefer studying at home because it's more relaxed. I can take short breaks when I need to, and there are fewer distractions than elsewhere.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Jawab langsung lalu beri alasan spesifik. Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan artikel ('the library'), serta hilangkan pengulangan kata 'quiet'. Buat kalimat lengkap maksimal 3-4 kalimat untuk jelas dan efektif.
Ví dụ: Yes, the library is a good place to study because it's quiet and helps me concentrate. There are also comfortable seats and useful reference books nearby.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Jelaskan preferensi dengan jelas: mulai dengan jawaban singkat lalu beri alasan konkret. Perbaiki pemilihan kata ('eat cafe' bukan frasa alami), gunakan 'a café' dan ungkapkan manfaat spesifik (ambience, coffee). Hindari kata-kata ragu seperti 'uh' dan frasa tidak jelas seperti 'feel more tear'.
Ví dụ: I would like a café nearby because the lively atmosphere and coffee make studying more enjoyable. It would be nice to study somewhere comfortable where I feel motivated.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Berikan jawaban yang lebih terstruktur: nyatakan rencana pendidikan secara jelas (degree name), lalu jelaskan tujuan karier dengan alasan spesifik. Perbaiki kosakata yang salah ('Basel' -> 'bachelor', 'bruising' tidak sesuai) dan tata bahasa (subject-verb agreement).
Ví dụ: I plan to study for a bachelor's degree in business administration. After graduating, I want to become a manager in a company in Indonesia so I can lead projects and grow professionally.
Ngữ pháp
× I'm a student, no, I mean 11th grade on Senior High School in Siracho because I live in Indonesia and I like study, of course.
✓ I'm a student. I am in 11th grade at Siracho Senior High School because I live in Indonesia, and I like studying, of course.
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