Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法正确并简洁。注意时态和动词形式（major in → majoring in；learn → learning；legal issue → legal issues）。开头用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一两句支持细节即可，避免冗长。

Ví dụ: I'm a final-year law student. I'm majoring in law because I'm passionate about learning how to use legal knowledge to resolve legal issues.

Gợi ý: 回答已较好，但可更自然地表达介词和学校名称（study at 而非 in），并用一小句补充具体理由或感受作为支持细节，使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: I study at Northwest University of Politics and Law, which is located in Xi'an, a historic city. I enjoy studying there because the city has many cultural sites that enrich my free time.

Gợi ý: 句子要注意单复数（for law students）、冠词和连词使用，避免累赘。先给确定回答，然后用一两点具体原因支持，使用连接词如 because 和 also 更自然地连接观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place for law students because many well-known lawyers and scholars teach there, and the campus has a comfortable, focused atmosphere for studying.

Gợi ý: 注意句子衔接与语法。把两句话合并并使用连词说明原因（suggest that the school allow ... because ...）。避免口语化表达 like 'kind of terrible'，用更正式的词如 'inconvenient'。

Ví dụ: I would suggest that the school allow some shared bicycles on campus because the dormitories are far from the teaching buildings, and walking long distances is very inconvenient for students.

Gợi ý: 回答不够明确且有语法错误（'I don't think that too much' 不清楚； 'be a staff in legal department' 应为 work in the legal department或be a staff member）。建议先给明确计划，然后说明条件和目标，用连接词衔接并更自然表达。

Ví dụ: I haven't planned everything yet, but if I pass the exam, I'd like to study at the University of Bristol to further my legal education, and eventually work in the legal department of an international company.

× I'm a senior student right now, major in law and I'm really passionate about learn how to use law to resolve legal issue.

✓ I'm a senior student right now, majoring in law, and I'm really passionate about learning how to use law to resolve legal issues.

句中“major”在此用作动名词短语应为“majoring”；“passionate about”后需接动名词，因此“learn”应为“learning”；“legal issue”需用复数“legal issues”。这些都属于动词加 -ing 形式和可数名词复数问题。建议：记住介词或固定搭配（如“be passionate about”）后接动名词；表示专业用“major in”时改写为进行式“majoring in”更自然。

× I study in the Northwest University of Politics and Law, which is located in Xi'an, a historical city in my country.

✓ I study at Northwest University of Political Science and Law, which is located in Xi'an, a historical city in my country.

英文机构名前通常用介词“at”表示在某学校学习，而校名中“Politics and Law”更常见的表达为“Political Science and Law”。此外校名前一般不加定冠词“the”（除非官方名称包含）。建议：用“study at + 学校名称”，并核对校名正式英译。

× Yes, it's really a good place for law student to study the major courses because there are a lot of well known lawyers and scholars in the school and it also has a cozy environment.

✓ Yes, it's really a good place for law students to study major courses because there are a lot of well-known lawyers and scholars at the school, and it also has a cozy environment.

“law student”应为复数“law students”以对应泛指；“major courses”前不需要定冠词“the”可以直接用复数；“well known”应连写为“well-known”；“in the school”更常用“at the school”。建议：注意泛指时名词复数形式及固定连字符用法。

× I would suggest that school can permit some shared bicycle on campus.

✓ I would suggest that the school allow some shared bicycles on campus.

在“suggest that”结构中，常用虚拟语气或“allow”原形：应为“suggest that the school allow...”而不是“school can permit”。此外“bicycle”应为复数“bicycles”。建议：学习固定结构“suggest that + 主语 + 动词原形”，并注意可数名词复数形式。

× Because of the long distance between dormitories and teaching buildings, it's kind of terrible for students to walk to the teaching buildings.

✓ Because of the long distance between the dormitories and the teaching buildings, it's rather difficult for students to walk to the teaching buildings.

重复使用“teaching buildings”可简化；“kind of terrible”口语化且不准确，改为“rather difficult”更合适；在表示两者之间距离时，应在可数名词前加定冠词“the”。建议：在正式回答中避免口语化模糊表达，使用更精确的形容词，并注意冠词使用。

× To be honest, I don't think that too much. If I can pass the exam, I would like to go to the University of Bristol to learn more and I would like to be a staff in legal department of a foreign company.

✓ To be honest, I haven't thought about it much. If I can pass the exam, I would like to go to the University of Bristol to learn more, and I would like to be a staff member in the legal department of a foreign company.

原句“To be honest, I don't think that too much.”时态/表达不自然，应改为完成时短语“I haven't thought about it much.”更符合意思；“be a staff”不自然，应为“be a staff member”；“legal department”前需要定冠词“the”。建议：用更地道的说法表达未曾深思（haven't thought about it），并注意固定搭配“staff member”“the legal department”。