Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify directly with a correct topic sentence, avoid unrelated words, reduce hesitations, use past tense consistently, and add one specific supporting detail. Keep it within 2–4 sentences. For example, start with a clear sentence: 'No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.' Then give a reason and a brief detail using linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents could not afford one. So I usually took public buses to school, which meant I had to leave earlier and sometimes wait in the rain.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and coherent linking words. Avoid vague or incorrect words and keep sentences simple and grammatical. Use vocabulary appropriate to the topic (e.g., 'popular among young people', 'commuting', 'exercise'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many use them for commuting to school or work because they are cheap and convenient, and others ride for exercise and leisure on weekends.

× No, I do not have a wife.

✓ No, I did not have one.

The question asked about having a bike as a child, so the student should refer to a bike, not a wife. 'Do not have' is present tense but the context is past; use past tense 'did not have'. Also use a pronoun or noun consistent with the question: 'one' (a bike) or 'a bike'. Replace 'wife' with 'a bike' or 'one' to match meaning and pronoun usage. Suggestion: Say 'No, I did not have a bike.'

× When I was child my parents could not afford 1 so I usually go and uh, going to school, uh, public transport.

✓ When I was a child my parents could not afford one, so I usually went to school by public transport.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'child' (use 'a child'), 'could not afford 1' appears to mean 'could not afford one' or 'a bike' so replace '1' with 'one' or 'a bike'. The time frame is past, so use past tense verbs: 'usually went' instead of 'usually go' and remove the incorrect gerund 'going'. Use the preposition 'by' with 'public transport'. Also add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: Say 'When I was a child my parents could not afford a bike, so I usually went to school by public transport.'

× Yes, bikes are popular for my children mainly a huge bikes is the plunder it moves most popular bikes usually a youngsters.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among children and young people. Big bikes are also popular, and many youngsters ride them.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition 'for my children' (should be 'in my country' or 'among children'), wrong article and plural agreement ('a huge bikes' mixes singular and plural), and ungrammatical fragments like 'is the plunder it moves'. Use present simple 'are popular' correctly and rephrase to clear, grammatical sentences: 'especially among children and young people' and 'Big bikes are also popular'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun forms. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among children and young people.'