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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Well actually I can't ride bike because I don't like work out.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because my friends are often use it and my family usually use it to go park and shopping mall.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答は質問(子供の頃自転車を持っていたか)に直接答えていません。まず質問に対して「はい/いいえ」で始め、その後理由や詳細を付け加えることが必要です。文法(主語と動詞の一致、過去形の使用)や語彙(ride a bike, exercise)を正しく使い、文を2〜3文に収めると自然です。例えば過去形を使い、なぜ持っていなかったか(親の方針、興味がなかった、別の交通手段を使った等)を具体的に述べて下さい。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents preferred that I walk or take the bus, so I never learned to ride. Also, I wasn’t very interested in sports, so I didn’t practice riding.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答えは肯定で始まっていますが、文法ミス(主語と動詞の一致、動詞形)や語順の改善が必要です。より具体的な理由(通勤、経済性、都市の自転車道の有無)や頻度を示すと説得力が増します。接続詞(because, so, for example)を使って理由と具体例をつなぎ、文は2〜3文にまとめて自然にしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they’re cheap and convenient. For example, my friends often cycle to university, and my family rides to the park or shopping mall on weekends.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Well actually I can't ride bike because I don't like work out.

Well, actually I can't ride a bike because I don't like working out.

This sentence uses a bare verb 'work out' after 'like'. In English, after verbs expressing preference (like, enjoy, dislike), the gerund (-ing) form is required when referring to activities. Also add the article 'a' before 'bike' and a comma after 'Well' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'like working out' and 'a bike'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, because my friends are often use it and my family usually use it to go park and shopping mall.

Yes, because my friends often use them and my family usually use them to go to the park and to the shopping mall.

Problems: 'are often use' is incorrect verb form and unnecessary 'are'; use simple present 'often use'. 'It' is wrong pronoun for plural 'bikes' so use 'them'. Also English requires the preposition 'to' before destinations: 'go to the park' and 'go to the shopping mall'. For parallelism, include 'to' before both destinations. Suggestion: 'my friends often use them' and 'go to the park and to the shopping mall'.

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