Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ понятный и естественный, но можно сделать его короче и логичнее — сначала дать прямой ответ, затем одну-две конкретные причины или примера. Избегайте повторов («we didn't have» дважды) и слишком общего «before». Также используйте связку для плавного перехода, например «instead» или «so».

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. We lived in a small apartment, so we didn't have space to store a bicycle. Instead, I spent a lot of time outdoors jogging, walking and playing with other children in the nearby park.

Gợi ý: Хорошая идея и содержание, но есть ошибки грамматики и лишние слова («uh», «they prefer» — лишнее местоимение). Улучшите связность с помощью связок («because», «so») и исправьте согласование глаголов («help» → «help» с множественным числом «bicycles» или «they help»). Дайте один-два конкретных примера, чтобы обосновать мнение.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bicycles are common in my hometown, especially in urban and suburban areas, because they are affordable and help people save money on fuel and fares. Also, many residents choose cycling to avoid traffic jams and reach work faster during rush hour.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid because we lived in a small apartment and we didn't have enough space to keep it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid because we lived in a small apartment and we didn't have enough space to keep one.

The sentence uses past tense correctly but repeats the noun 'bike' where a pronoun or substitute noun should be used. Replacing with 'one' avoids repetition and is more natural in English. Suggestion: Use 'one' to replace a previously mentioned countable noun when the noun is clear from context.

× However, I did many outdoor activities like jogging, walking, or playing with other kids before.

✓ However, I did many outdoor activities like jogging, walking, and playing with other kids.

Using 'before' at the end is unnecessary and awkward here; the parallel gerund forms (jogging, walking, playing) are correct. Also use 'and' rather than 'or' when listing activities actually done together. Remove 'before' because the past tense 'did' already sets the time frame. Suggestion: Keep parallel gerund forms and use coordinating conjunctions for lists; avoid redundant time adverbs.

× Yeah, for sure. Bicycles are quite popular in my hometown, especially in urban and semi urban areas because they are affordable and uh, helps people to save their money on fuel and on fares.

✓ Yeah, for sure. Bicycles are quite popular in my hometown, especially in urban and semi-urban areas because they are affordable and help people save money on fuel and fares.

Subject 'they' is plural so the verb must be base form 'help', not 'helps' (subject-verb agreement). 'Semi urban' should be hyphenated as 'semi-urban' when used as a compound adjective. 'Save their money on fuel and on fares' is wordy; use 'save money on fuel and fares'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with plural subject, use hyphenation for compound adjectives, and simplify redundant phrases.

× Besides that, many residents they prefer cycling to avoid traffic jams.

✓ Besides that, many residents prefer cycling to avoid traffic jams.

The sentence contains a redundant subject: both 'many residents' and 'they' are present. English requires a single subject; remove the pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: Do not repeat the subject; choose either the noun phrase or a pronoun, not both.