Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct basic grammar and pronunciation, organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 specific supporting details, and avoid redundant fragments. Use past tense for childhood events, correct vocabulary (bike, built/made), and a logical sequence (who, what, how it influenced you). Keep answer within 2–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child that my father built for me. I learned to ride on it in our neighbourhood, and it taught me confidence and how to balance — later I even joined races with my friends.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, direct opinion sentence then support it with specific reasons and contrast if needed. Use correct vocabulary (people drive cars, travel by high-speed trains), simple linking words (however, because, for example), and correct tense. Avoid filler sounds and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I used to think bikes were more popular in the past, but now fewer people use them. Many families prefer cars or take high-speed trains for long trips, so cycling is mainly for exercise or short journeys rather than everyday transport.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bite which is which was made by my father and I learned a lot from this pride from to beginning to how to write right and to make a race between my.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike that was made by my father, and I learned a lot from it from the beginning, such as how to ride correctly and how to race with my friends.

Multiple errors: 1) 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 2) 'bite' is a wrong word choice; correct word is 'bike' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors / word choice). 3) 'which is which was made by my father' is ungrammatical and redundant; use 'that was made by my father' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 4) 'I learned a lot from this pride' incorrect word 'pride' should be 'it' or 'that experience' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 5) 'from to beginning to how to write right' contains wrong preposition and word 'write' should be 'ride' and 'right' should be 'correctly' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 11 and 13). 6) 'to make a race between my' is incomplete; correct to 'how to race with my friends' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggestion: use simple past for past events, choose correct vocabulary (bike/ride), use relative clause 'that was made by my father', and keep clauses clear and complete.

× Uh, price were very popular in our country, uh, once, once, uh, in in the past, but not many people are on their cars and any people goes outside to other cities via high speed changes. So.

✓ Uh, bikes were very popular in our country in the past, but now many people use their cars to travel to other cities on the highways.

Multiple issues: 1) 'price' is incorrect word; intended word is 'bikes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure/word choice). 2) 'were very popular' is correct past tense for 'bikes were popular' (no change needed there after fixing the noun) (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). 3) 'not many people are on their cars' is incorrect: use 'use their cars' (incorrect preposition 'on') (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 4) 'any people goes' has subject-verb agreement error: 'people go' not 'goes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors). 5) 'via high speed changes' is unclear; correct phrase is 'on the highways' or 'on high-speed roads' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26/11). Suggestion: use correct nouns, match verb forms to plural subjects, use verbs like 'use' rather than 'are on', and choose standard phrases 'travel to other cities on the highways' or 'on high-speed roads'.