Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ студента не отвечает на вопрос — он повторил вопрос. Нужно сразу дать прямой ответ (Yes/No) и добавить одно-два предложения с подробностями. Используйте связки (because, when, so) и избегайте заполнителей (uh, um). Пример поэтапно: 1) тема: короткий ответ; 2) поддержка: когда/почему/с кем; 3) завершение: краткое заключение или следующее действие.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to go to my friend’s house and to the park because it was the easiest way to get around. When I was about ten, I learned to ride without training wheels, which made me feel very independent.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит нужную идею, но страдает от слов-паразитов, повторов и нехватки конкретики. Нужно сказать прямо, использовать связующие слова (because, for example, especially) и добавить конкретный пример или причину (например, из-за пробок, низкой стоимости или здоровья). Ограничьте ответ до 2–4 предложений и избегайте повторений.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or to the market to avoid traffic jams, and cycling is also encouraged for health and environmental reasons.

× I think, uh, I am sure that bike is popular in my country because uh, many people use uh, a bike, a bike when, uh, we, when they go to.

✓ I think, uh, I am sure that bikes are popular in my country because, uh, many people use bikes when they go to places.

The student uses singular 'bike' and mixes pronouns 'we' and 'they', causing subject-verb and number problems. Use plural 'bikes' to match 'many people' (third person plural) and plural verb 'are'. Also remove redundant 'a' and duplicate words. Suggested improvement: match noun number with the subject (many people -> bikes), keep consistent pronouns (use 'they' or 'we' but not both), and avoid filler repetition. For fluency, say: 'I am sure that bikes are popular in my country because many people use bikes when they go somewhere.'