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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was in primary school I already have a bike and I really like this.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, recently bike is a very popular activity for people, usually especially for young people, 'cause now people are very paying attention on health.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法和时态需改正,回答要更自然并补充具体细节以丰富内容。建议用过去时描述过去拥有的物品,主句明确回答后可用一两句说明例如什么时候得到的、如何使用或为什么喜欢。注意连贯性和简洁性,最多5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used it to ride to my friend's house and around the neighborhood almost every day. I loved it because it gave me a sense of freedom and helped me stay active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 注意主谓一致和用词准确,同时用连接词使答案更连贯。可以先直接回答,然后说明原因并给具体例子(例如骑行作为通勤或健身方式,城市共享单车的普及)。保持句子简洁,避免口语化缩略词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Cycling has become particularly popular among young people as a form of exercise and commuting, especially since many cities now offer bike-sharing programs. As a result, more people choose bikes to stay fit and avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, when I was in primary school I already have a bike and I really like this.

Yes, when I was in primary school I already had a bike and I really liked it.

问题类型:现在时使用错误(对应列表第6项)——句子中描述的是过去发生的情况,但使用了现在时态 have/like,时态不一致。建议:把动词改为过去式以与句子开头的过去时间状语(when I was in primary school)一致。具体改为“had”和“liked”;另外将代词 this 改为 it,更自然地指代“自行车”。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, recently bike is a very popular activity for people, usually especially for young people, 'cause now people are very paying attention on health.

Yes, recently biking is a very popular activity among people, especially young people, because now people are paying more attention to their health.

问题类型:单复数/名词形式错误(对应列表第1项)以及介词和搭配错误(对应列表第11项)。原句中用 bike(单数名词)来表示作为活动的“骑自行车”,更自然的表达是动名词形式 biking 或者 bicycle riding;且短语 attention on health 不地道,应为 pay attention to health(或 pay more attention to their health)。建议:用动名词“biking”或“cycling”,用介词短语“pay attention to”,并把表达调整为“paying more attention to their health”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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