Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country right now because of the gas price inflation. Many of the commuters would prefer to have uh, or to use bike instead of commuting or paying for fair transportation. Fair I mean.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Be careful with tense and give a fuller, natural response. Use past tense for childhood and add a brief reason or contrast to make the answer more informative. Keep it under 5 sentences and use a topic sentence followed by one supporting detail with a linking word.
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Improve fluency and accuracy: avoid hesitations and incorrect words (e.g., ‘fair’ → ‘fare’). Use linking words to structure the answer and give a specific example or statistic to support your point. Keep to a maximum of five sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., commuters, cost‑effective, alternative transport).
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes have become quite popular recently because rising petrol prices make cycling a cost‑effective option. Moreover, many commuters choose bikes for short journeys, for example, people living near the city centre now cycle to work to save both time and money.
× No, I don't.
✓ No, I didn't.
The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'I don't' is present tense; use 'I didn't' to indicate not having a bike in the past.
× Many of the commuters would prefer to have uh, or to use bike instead of commuting or paying for fair transportation.
✓ Many commuters prefer to use bikes instead of commuting by or paying for public transportation.
Several issues: 'would prefer' is conditional and unnecessary here; use simple present 'prefer' for general statements. 'to have uh, or to use bike' is disfluent and missing articles and plural: use 'use bikes'. 'commuting or paying for fair transportation' is incorrect: 'commuting by' or 'paying for public transportation' is correct. Also 'fair' is wrong word; 'public' is intended.
× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country right now because of the gas price inflation.
✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in our country right now because of rising gas prices.
Style and article issues: 'bikes' is fine but 'bicycles' is more formal; 'gas price inflation' is awkward—use 'rising gas prices'. Plural 'prices' matches 'rising' and context. No article needed but word choice improved for clarity.
× instead of commuting or paying for fair transportation. Fair I mean.
✓ instead of using public transportation. I mean 'public transportation'.
Preposition and word choice: 'paying for fair transportation' is incorrect—'public transportation' is the correct noun. Also 'commuting or paying for' is redundant; prefer 'using public transportation'. The short clarification 'Fair I mean' is informal and ungrammatical; restate clearly.