Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did, I often buy back when I go through to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Teenagers like it very much because it can exist.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 43.0Gợi ý: 句子不自然且含义不明确。要点:1) 时态与表达需更准确(过去常做某事用 'used to' 或 'often rode');2) 用词错误('buy back' 和 'go through to school' 不对);3) 简洁回答后用一到两句具体细节支持,如谁与何时骑、骑车的频率或感受。示例句型:主题句 + 连接词 + 具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school almost every day when I was younger, which took about 15 minutes. It was a fun way to get exercise and meet my friends on the way.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且语法错误。要点:1) 明确表达观点(简短主题句);2) 使用连接词给出具体原因(例如:convenient, cheap, healthy);3) 避免不合逻辑的短语如 'because it can exist'。提供具体例子或比较以增强说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially among teenagers, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students cycle to school or the nearest shops instead of taking buses.
× Yes I did, I often buy back when I go through to school.
✓ Yes, I did. I often bought one when I walked to school.
此句涉及过去时使用错误。问题是学生回答过去有自行车,句子第二部分却用了现在时动词“buy”以及不自然的短语“buy back when I go through to school”。应使用过去时“bought”以与开头的过去时间状语和助动词“did”一致;此外‘go through to school’不符合英语习惯,改为更常见的表达如“walked to school”。建议:回顾一般过去时的构成和时间一致性,确保描述过去事件时动词使用过去式,并用自然的短语表达“上学”如 go to school 或 walk to school。
× Teenagers like it very much because it can exist.
✓ Teenagers like them very much because they are common.
此句存在代词使用不当和词汇搭配问题。原句用单数代词“it”指代复数名词“bikes”,应使用复数代词“them”。此外“because it can exist”语义不通,可能想表达“自行车很普遍/常见”,因此改为“they are common”。建议:注意代词要与其所指名词在人称与数上保持一致;表达普遍存在时使用常见搭配,如 common, popular, widely used 等。