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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a five since I was a child. I love use my bike to go everywhere. It is very enjoy and relax and it can help me. With this stress and exercise.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Hello. And it's not popular in Macau because Macau's work is very level and you can't use fine to go a lot of page.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: You should answer clearly with correct tense and grammar, give a brief topic sentence, and 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, correct tense: "I had a bicycle when I was a child." Then add reasons or memories: use linking words such as "because" or "so" and give specific details about where you rode and how it helped you.

Ví dụ: I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it to visit friends and go to the park because it was faster than walking. Riding helped me relax and gave me regular exercise, so I felt less stressed after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer (Yes or No) and follow with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "however." Avoid irrelevant words and incorrect expressions. Mention concrete factors affecting popularity (e.g., busy roads, short distances, public transport).

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in Macau because the city is small and most people use buses or cars for convenience. Also, the roads are often busy and there is limited space for cycling, so many people prefer other transport.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a five since I was a child.

Yes, I had one since I was a child.

The student is talking about possession in the past continuing from childhood, so the past tense 'had' is appropriate. Also 'a five' is incorrect idiomatically; use 'one' or 'a bike'. Suggestion: say 'I had a bike since I was a child' or 'I have had a bike since I was a child' if you want to emphasize continuity to the present.

Verb + -ing form

× I love use my bike to go everywhere.

I love using my bike to go everywhere.

After verbs like 'love', a gerund (-ing form) is required when followed by another verb acting as a noun. 'Love use' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'love using' or 'I like to use my bike'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It is very enjoy and relax and it can help me.

It is very enjoyable and relaxing, and it helps me.

'Enjoy' and 'relax' are verbs; adjectives 'enjoyable' and 'relaxing' are needed to describe the bike ride. Also verb tense and agreement: use 'helps' for present habitual action. Suggestion: use 'enjoyable and relaxing' and 'it helps me'.

Sentence structure errors

× With this stress and exercise.

It helps me relieve stress and get exercise.

The fragment lacks a main verb and clear structure. Rewriting as a full sentence clarifies meaning: 'It helps me relieve stress and get exercise.' Use verbs 'relieve' and 'get' to show the benefits.

Sentence structure errors

× Hello.

No correction needed; remove or replace with a greeting appropriate to the context (optional).

'Hello.' is not an answer to the question; it's extraneous. If intended as a filler, it's best omitted in a test response. This is a pragmatic suggestion rather than a strict grammar correction.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× And it's not popular in Macau because Macau's work is very level and you can't use fine to go a lot of page.

Bicycles are not very popular in Macau because the work is fast-paced and you cannot use them to travel to many places.

Multiple issues: vague noun reference and collocations. 'It's not popular' is unclear—specify 'bicycles'. 'Work is very level' is incorrect collocation; likely 'fast-paced' or 'busy'. 'You can't use fine to go a lot of page' contains several errors: 'fine' wrong word, 'a lot of page' should be 'many places' or 'far'. Suggestion: 'Bicycles are not very popular in Macau because people are often busy and you cannot use them to travel to many places.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FineExcellent; Worthy; Impressive; Elegant; Delicate
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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