Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be grammatically accurate, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (um, uh) and correct verb forms and word order (e.g., “I had,” “my dad gave me,” “I was” ). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave it to me as a birthday present, and I was very excited because it was my first bike. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and to explore the neighborhood almost every day.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific, organized reasons using linking words (e.g., “Firstly,” “Also,” “For example”). Use correct nouns and quantifiers (children, people) and avoid repetition and fillers. Mention one or two concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many children ride bikes to school because it is cheap and convenient. Also, a lot of adults enjoy cycling for exercise and leisure on weekends, for example in parks and along riversides.

× I do have a bike when I was a child, that bike was my dad, umm, give me as a birthday gift and I were super excited at that time because it is my first time get to get the bike and I used a bike to, uh, ask my.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. That bike was a birthday gift from my dad, and I was very excited at that time because it was my first time getting a bike. I used the bike to ...

Multiple tense and form errors: The event is in the past, so use past simple 'had' not 'do have' (Present tense issue ID 6). 'That bike was my dad, give me' should be 'a gift from my dad' (incorrect word order and preposition; preposition issue ID 11). 'I were' is incorrect; use 'I was' for singular past (subject-verb agreement / past tense; IDs 5 and 27). 'it is my first time get to get the bike' mixes present tense and wrong verb form; for a past first-time experience use 'it was my first time getting a bike' (use past tense and gerund after 'first time' — Verb + -ing form ID 8 and Past tense issue ID 5). 'I used a bike to, uh, ask my.' is incomplete and unclear (sentence structure error ID 26). Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense, use correct past forms ('had', 'was', 'was my first time getting'), change 'give me' to 'a gift from my dad', and complete the final clause with the intended purpose (for example 'ride around the neighborhood').

× Yes, I do think like that because, uh, most of the child, umm, they use bike as a transportation to go to school every day and otherwise, umm, most people they like use the bike to go bicycling, umm, in the weekend. So I think it's really popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think so because most children use bikes as transportation to go to school every day. Also, many people like to ride bikes for exercise on the weekend. So I think it's really popular in my country.

Several errors: 'most of the child' should be plural 'most children' (singular and plural issue ID 1). 'they use bike' needs plural 'bikes' (singular/plural ID 1). 'as a transportation' should be 'as transportation' or 'as a means of transportation' (article/preposition issue ID 22 and 11). 'most people they like use the bike to go bicycling' is redundant and ungrammatical — remove extra pronoun 'they', use 'many people like to ride bikes' (pronoun misuse ID 12 and verb form issue ID 8). 'in the weekend' should be 'on the weekend' or 'at the weekend' (preposition issue ID 11). Suggestions: Use plural nouns to match 'most', remove redundant pronouns, use 'ride' or 'ride bikes' instead of 'use the bike to go bicycling', and use correct prepositions for days/time.