Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize your answer into a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Fix grammar (use past tense correctly), use appropriate verbs (ride, not write), and avoid repetitions. Keep it within 2–3 sentences. For example, start with a direct answer, then give one specific detail about the gift and how often you used it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bicycle for my birthday, and I rode it every day around the neighborhood after school. I especially enjoyed riding with my friends on weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific, organized reasons. Improve grammar and word choice (e.g., say 'many children use them' and 'ride' instead of 'write'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid repeating phrases. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences with specific examples of common uses.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many children and teenagers use them for fun and short trips. For example, children often ride bikes to play with friends or race in parks, and many people also use bicycles to travel short distances to school or shops.

× Yes I did and when my birthday my parents gave me as a gift and I I used to write every day.

✓ Yes, I did. For my birthday my parents gave me a bike as a gift, and I used to ride it every day.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing punctuation, incorrect word order, missing noun (what was given), and wrong verb choice 'write' instead of 'ride'. Break the run-on into two sentences, place 'for my birthday' before the clause it modifies, include the noun 'bike', and use the correct verb 'ride'. Suggestion: separate ideas with a period or conjunction, ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb, and choose verbs that match the action described.

× Actually, yes, because in many young children I use, I use it to writing and playing with your friends and traveling and their sometimes they play, they race with their friends, they with their friends.

✓ Actually, yes. Many young children use bikes to travel, to play, and to ride with their friends; sometimes they race with their friends.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has confusing references ('I use', 'your friends', 'their'). It also contains redundant and disordered phrases. Replace incorrect pronouns with the appropriate subject ('many young children' and 'they'), use infinitive forms 'to travel' and 'to play' instead of 'to writing', and remove repetitions. Suggestion: keep subject consistent, use correct verb forms after 'to', and avoid mixing second-person 'your' with third-person 'children'.