Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と語彙の選択に大きな誤りがあります。また文法（時制・語順・動詞形）と語句の使い方が不自然なので、簡潔で正確な過去の経験を述べる練習をしてください。具体的には､“have/had a bike”や“my father taught me to ride a bicycle”のような基本表現を覚え、短い文で過去形を正しく使うことを意識しましょう。自己修正の練習（スローに話して自分の文章をチェックする）や、ネイティブの短い模範回答を音読することが効果的です。

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it when I was about seven, and I used to ride to the park after school.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが、表現がやや不自然で冗長です。理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、語彙を少し具体的にすると良いです。例えば“because”の後に具体的な影響（traffic congestion, safety issues）を示し、文を二つか三つに分けて明瞭に述べましょう。発音と冠詞・前置詞の使い方（to work / workplaces）も確認してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular. Many people use them to commute to work or school, so roads can become crowded during peak hours. Because of this, traffic congestion and safety concerns sometimes occur.

× Yes, I load a vagina when in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The student used completely incorrect and inappropriate words ('load a vagina') and an incorrect sentence structure. Use the past tense of 'have' (had) to describe possession in childhood and the common phrase 'when I was a child' or 'in my childhood.' Suggestion: learn correct vocabulary for 'bicycle' and use 'had' plus time expression 'when I was a child.'

× In my childhood my father in instruct me to how to write on bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, my father instructed me how to ride a bicycle.

Errors: wrong preposition and auxiliary ('in instruct'), incorrect verb form ('instruct me' should be past 'instructed me'), incorrect use of 'to how to write' and wrong verb 'write' instead of 'ride,' and missing article before 'bicycle.' Use past tense 'instructed' for a completed action, use the structure 'instructed me how to + verb' or 'taught me to + verb.' Also include the article 'a' before 'bicycle.' Suggestion: practice past simple regular verbs and common collocations like 'ride a bicycle' and correct word order with time clauses at the start: 'When I was a child, ...'.

× Yes, I think they are popular.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It correctly uses the plural subject 'they' with the plural adjective 'popular.'

× In my country people commute to their working place or school by bikes and I feel it is not convenient because it makes roads to crowd it.

✓ In my country, people commute to work or to school by bicycle, and I feel it is not convenient because it makes the roads crowded.

Problems: 'working place' is unnatural — use 'work'; 'by bikes' is grammatically acceptable but 'by bicycle' is more natural; 'it makes roads to crowd it' is incorrect structure. Use 'makes the roads crowded' or 'causes the roads to be crowded.' Also add commas for clarity and the definite article 'the' before 'roads' when referring to specific roads. Suggestion: practice common collocations: 'commute to work,' 'by bicycle,' and passive/cause constructions like 'make something + adjective' (make the roads crowded).