Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tense (use past), singular/plural, and common words (bike, not bite). Keep it to 2–4 sentences and avoid filler.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my little brother and cousins during school holidays, which made me feel very excited. Sometimes we raced each other around the park, and those rides are one of my fondest childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, then give a reason and a brief comparison (past vs present). Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, however, nowadays). Avoid repeating words and finish the thought.

Ví dụ: From my perspective, bikes used to be very popular among children and young people in my country because there was less technology to keep them indoors. However, nowadays many young people prefer smartphones and video games, so fewer children ride bikes regularly.

× Actually, I have a bite when I was a child I usually play with my little brother or my cousin if I have a free times or do it or during the school holiday which make me feel excited and.

✓ Actually, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually played with my little brother or my cousin if I had free time, especially during the school holidays, which made me feel excited.

Errors: incorrect present tense verbs ('have', 'play', 'have') used with past time marker 'when I was a child'; plural/singular nouns ('bite' should be 'bike', 'free times' should be 'free time'); verb agreement and tense consistency. Suggestions: Use past tense consistently for past situations (had, played, made). Correct noun forms (bike, free time, holidays). Break long run-on sentence into shorter sentences and place time expressions ('when I was a child', 'during the school holidays') with past tense verbs for clarity.

× Actually, I have a bite when I was a child I usually play with my little brother or my cousin if I have a free times or do it or during the school holiday which make me feel excited and.

✓ Actually, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually played with my little brother or my cousin if I had free time, especially during the school holidays, which made me feel excited.

Errors: 'bite' is a wrong word form (should be 'bike'); 'free times' is incorrect pluralization (use 'free time'); 'school holiday' should be plural 'school holidays' when speaking of recurring breaks. Suggestions: Use correct singular/plural forms: 'bike', 'free time', 'school holidays'.

× For my perspective, in the past, bikes are populars among child peoples and young people and young peoples in my country because there is no technology or social media yet, but nowadays, but.

✓ From my perspective, in the past, bikes were popular among children and young people in my country because there was no technology or social media yet, but nowadays they are less popular.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and pluralization: 'bikes are populars' is incorrect (use 'bikes were popular' or 'bikes were popular' and 'populars' is wrong); 'child peoples' and repeated 'young peoples' are incorrect plurals (use 'children' and 'young people'); tense inconsistency: past context requires past tense 'were' and 'was'. Suggestions: Use correct plural nouns (children, young people) and match verb tense to time frame (were, was). Remove redundant words and complete the contrast clause ('nowadays they are less popular').