Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak in clear, grammatical sentences and avoid hesitations. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses (past simple) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘ride’, ‘friends’, ‘fun activities’). Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was about six years old. My parents bought it for me, and I loved riding it with my friends. We often explored the neighborhood and played games in the park, which made childhood very fun.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion sentence then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use correct nouns and verbs (e.g., ‘bicycles’, ‘scan’), avoid repetition and hesitations, and use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because of the widespread shared-bike systems. For example, many people rent a bike by scanning a QR code on their phones for short trips to work or the store. This makes cycling convenient and affordable for daily use.

× Yes, I remember that my parents have biked uh, I have bought a bike for me when I was maybe 6 years old and I love it because I can rode it with uh, with my friend and we would and we could do many interesting thing.

✓ Yes, I remember that my parents biked, and they bought a bike for me when I was maybe 6 years old, and I loved it because I could ride it with my friend and we could do many interesting things.

Multiple verb form errors: 'have biked' is odd here—simple past 'biked' fits narrative about childhood; 'I have bought a bike for me' should be 'they bought a bike for me' or 'my parents bought me a bike' to reflect the subject and correct tense; 'I love it' should be past 'I loved it' to keep past timeframe; 'can rode it' mixes modal and past form—use 'could ride' for past ability; 'many interesting thing' needs plural 'things'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events, match subjects with verbs, use correct modal+base verb forms and plural nouns where needed.

× Yes, I think by a bicycle is very popular in my country because there are many shared bikes, uh, shared bikes on the streets.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because there are many shared bikes on the streets.

'by a bicycle is very popular' is incorrect word choice and singular/plural mismatch. Use plural 'bicycles are' to match general statement and subject-verb agreement. Also remove erroneous 'by' article. Suggestion: use plural noun and plural verb for general facts (Bicycles are popular).

× And people can use this by scan the QR codes by scanning the QR code on it when they have to uh, have to go out for a little, uh, a short, a short trips or other things.

✓ And people can use them by scanning the QR code on the bike when they have to go out for a short trip or other errands.

Incorrect verb form: 'use this by scan' mixes base verb after 'by'—after 'by' use the -ing form 'scanning'. 'QR codes' vs 'QR code' depends on singular/plural—use 'the QR code on the bike' or 'QR codes' consistently; 'a short, a short trips' repeats and misuses article/plural—use 'a short trip' or 'short trips'. Also 'other things' is vague—'other errands' is clearer. Suggestion: after 'by' use gerund, ensure noun number consistency and avoid repetition.