Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, direct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two concise, specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations, grammar errors (e.g., write → ride, ones → one/bicycle), and contradictory statements. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and keep responses within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. However, I rarely rode it because I felt nervous cycling alone on busy streets, so my parents preferred that I walk or stay nearby. As a result, I didn’t become a confident rider.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and one brief example. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., ‘From my point of view’, ‘there are few bike lanes’, ‘policy to encourage cycling’). Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’ to organize ideas, and finish with a complete sentence.

Ví dụ: From my point of view, cycling is not very popular in my country because there are few safe bike lanes and motorists often ignore cyclists. For example, in my city most roads are designed for cars, so many people feel unsafe riding bicycles. I think the government should build dedicated cycle paths to encourage more people to use bikes.

× When I was a child I used to have ones, but I do not normally write because I just feel like riding a bike is something that's very, umm, so scared and it's kind of like making me feel insecure when have to ride alone.

✓ When I was a child I used to have one, but I do not normally ride because I just feel scared of riding a bike and it makes me feel insecure when I have to ride alone.

The original sentence has a plural 'ones' where 'one' (singular) is appropriate (singular and plural issue). 'Write' is a typo for 'ride'. Also missing subject 'I' before 'have to ride alone'. Correct to maintain clarity and correct number agreement. Suggestion: use 'one' for a single bike, use 'ride' not 'write', and include the subject 'I' before verbs like 'have to'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× So I don't really want it when I was a kid.

✓ So I didn't really want it when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past time reference 'when I was a kid'. Use past tense 'didn't' to match the time frame. Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent with the time expression in the sentence. Grammar problem type ID:6

× From my part of you, I don't think so, because you know, specialists in Thailand, there is not only there is no a pilot for a bicycle at all.

✓ From my point of view, I don't think so, because in Thailand there is no infrastructure for bicycles at all.

'From my part of you' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'From my point of view' (preposition and idiom). The phrase 'there is not only there is no a pilot for a bicycle' is ungrammatical and seems to attempt to say there is no bicycle infrastructure; prepositions and articles are wrong. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations ('in Thailand') and 'infrastructure for bicycles' to convey the idea clearly. Grammar problem type ID:11

× So I would like to the government to implement a policy or make the bicycle more useful and.

✓ So I would like the government to implement policies or make bicycles more useful.

The phrase 'I would like to the government' contains an unnecessary article placement; correct is 'I would like the government'. 'Make the bicycle more useful' is awkward and singular; use plural 'bicycles' or 'bicycle use' and plural 'policies' to sound natural. Also the sentence was incomplete; remove trailing conjunction and finish the idea. Suggestion: use 'the government' without extra articles and pluralize nouns as needed for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:22