Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、時制や文法、語順に改善が必要です。また冗長な表現を避け、明確なトピック文と一貫した補足を使ってください。具体的には：1) 過去の習慣や出来事を述べるので過去形を使う（I didn’t have／I learned）2) 冗長なフレーズ（"that and that"、重複した単語）を削除する3) トピック文の後に理由や時期を示す短い補足を一つか二つ入れる（when I was in junior high school, I learned to ride）4) 文章数は3文以内にまとめる。

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was a young child because I couldn’t ride one. However, when I was in junior high school I learned how to ride a bicycle, and after that I used it sometimes to go to school.

Gợi ý: 内容は明確ですが、より自然で詳しい表現にすると良いです。具体的には：1) 冠詞と語順を正しく使う（"riding bike" → "riding bikes" または "cycling"）2) 補足情報を加えて具体性を高める（どの層が使うか、どの場面か、便利な理由など）3) 文章をつなぐ接続語を使って流れを良くする（For example, However, Nowadaysなど）。

Ví dụ: Yes, cycling is very popular in Japan. Many commuters, especially students and office workers, use bicycles for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, I often see crowded bike parking areas near train stations.

× I don't have a bike because I couldn't ride that and that I didn't train myself at all.

✓ I didn't have a bike because I couldn't ride one and I hadn't trained myself at all.

The student is talking about the past, so present tense 'don't have' is incorrect. Use past simple 'didn't have'. Also, 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to a bike; use 'one' or 'a bike'. The phrase 'I didn't train myself' is awkward; 'I hadn't trained myself' (past perfect) clarifies that the lack of training occurred before the time being discussed. Suggestion: Keep past time frame consistent and use appropriate pronouns for objects. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× And when I junior high, I was junior high school student, I trained trained to ride up.

✓ When I was in junior high school, I learned to ride a bike.

The original sentence has word order and redundancy problems: missing preposition 'in' for 'in junior high', repeating 'trained', and the unnatural phrase 'ride up'. Use a clear past-tense structure: 'When I was in junior high school' and 'learned to ride a bike' or 'trained to ride a bike'. Suggestion: Use 'learned to' or 'trained to' plus base verb, include necessary prepositions, and remove repeated words. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, in Japan riding bike is very popular and a lot of commuters use that.

✓ Yes, in Japan riding bikes is very popular and a lot of commuters use them.

'Riding bike' needs plural or an article: use 'riding bikes' or 'riding a bike'. 'That' is incorrect as a pronoun for 'bikes'; use 'them'. Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'riding bikes is' is acceptable as a gerund phrase. Suggestion: Use plural noun or include an article and use correct pronouns for plural references. Grammar problem type ID: 11