Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks development. Give a brief topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a memorable experience). Keep it natural and no more than 4–5 sentences. Use a linking word if you add more than one detail (for example, “and” or “also”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle that I often rode around my neighborhood with my older brother, and we would race each other on weekends. It helped me learn balance and made my childhood more active and fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but it has grammar mistakes and could be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide two specific reasons with linking words and one concrete example. Correct grammar (e.g., “it reduces” not “it reduce”) and avoid absolute statements (“everyone should”) unless softened. Keep the total to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country. For one thing, many people use bikes for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and for another, cycling is promoted as a healthy activity that reduces the risk of heart disease. For example, my city has several bike lanes and community cycling events on weekends.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country and my personal opinion is everyone should do cycling.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, and in my opinion everyone should cycle.

The sentence uses 'my personal opinion is' awkwardly and 'do cycling' is an incorrect verb phrase. Use 'in my opinion' to express viewpoint more naturally, and use the verb 'cycle' rather than 'do cycling' for correct collocation and conciseness. Suggestion: Say 'in my opinion everyone should cycle' or 'I think everyone should cycle.'

× It is good for health and it reduce the cardiovascular diseases and chance of heart attacks as well.

✓ It is good for your health and it reduces cardiovascular disease and the chance of heart attacks as well.

There are several issues: 'good for health' is missing a determiner—use 'your health.' 'It reduce' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'it' requires 'reduces' (third person singular). 'Cardiovascular diseases' is better as the uncountable phrase 'cardiovascular disease' here, and 'the chance of heart attacks' needs the definite article 'the.' Suggestions: Use correct subject-verb agreement and articles: 'It is good for your health and it reduces cardiovascular disease and the chance of heart attacks.'