Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant with good reasons, but it could be slightly more concise and use a linking phrase to improve coherence. To raise the score, start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details and a short concluding phrase. Avoid small redundancies (e.g., "bike" vs "bicycle") and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My family lived on a very busy street, so my parents were worried about traffic safety; therefore, they didn't let me learn to ride early. As a result, I didn't become confident cycling until I was older.

Gợi ý: Good content and clear opinion, but there are some language and specificity issues. Improve by using accurate vocabulary (e.g., "shared bike system"), correct small grammar errors, and add a linking word to connect reasons. Also include one concrete example or statistic to make your answer more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For short daily trips, especially among students, people prefer cycling because it is cheap, convenient and environmentally friendly. Moreover, the expansion of dedicated bike lanes and the growth of shared-bike services in many cities have made cycling much easier and safer.

× Actually, I didn't own a bicycle in my childhood.

✓ Actually, I didn't own a bicycle when I was a child.

The phrase 'in my childhood' is not wrong but sounds less natural in this conversational context. Using 'when I was a child' fits the past-tense question and is more idiomatic for spoken English. Suggest using time expressions that match conversational style.

× That's why I never learned to ride the bike at an early age.

✓ That's why I never learned to ride a bike at an early age.

The article 'the' before 'bike' is inappropriate because the speaker refers to bicycles in general, not a specific bike. Replace with the indefinite article 'a' or omit the article. This is an article use issue linked to noun reference; correction makes the sentence more natural.

× A huge number of people ride bicycle for daily short trip, especially students, because they are cheap, convenient and eco friendly.

✓ A huge number of people ride bicycles for daily short trips, especially students, because they are cheap, convenient and eco-friendly.

'Bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' to agree with 'people' riding multiple bicycles. Also 'short trip' should be plural 'short trips' to match 'daily' general meaning. 'Eco friendly' needs a hyphen when used as a compound adjective before a noun ('eco-friendly') though hyphenation is stylistic; keep consistency. These changes fix number agreement and adjective form.

× Many countries have built bike lanes and shale bike system which make cycling more easy.

✓ Many countries have built bike lanes and shared bike systems, which make cycling easier.

Several issues: 'shale' is a typo for 'shared'; 'bike system' should be plural 'bike systems' to match 'many countries' and plural 'lanes'; missing comma before the relative clause improves clarity. 'More easy' is nonstandard; use the comparative adjective 'easier'. These corrections address word choice, plurality, punctuation, and comparative form.