Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and redundancies. To improve, give a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then 1–2 specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Keep sentences short and coherent, use past tense when talking about childhood and avoid repeating phrases. Focus on one clear reason or memory and provide a brief consequence or feeling.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I really wanted one and often asked my parents, but they couldn’t afford it then. When I became a teenager, I finally saved money and bought my first bike, which I enjoyed riding with my friends.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a basic reason but is repetitive and contains grammar errors. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, followed by one specific reason and an example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and correct noun phrases (a means of transport; affordable). Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable means of transport. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances in cities since they are cheaper than motorbikes and cars, so traffic and fuel costs are lower.

× No I have not a bike when I am where I am I was a child but at that is I have a crazy to buy to have a new bike which I can drive and go to with my friends but whenever when I comes in my teenage then I can purchase a bike so.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I really wanted to buy a new bike that I could ride and go out with my friends; however, I bought one when I was a teenager.

The original sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect verb forms and word order. Use past tense 'did not have' and 'was' for past situations. Replace 'have a crazy to buy' with 'really wanted to buy' to convey desire. Use 'that I could ride' instead of awkward phrasing. Also correct subject-verb agreement 'comes' to 'was' or remove. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood events and simplify clauses for clarity.

× Yes, obviously bikes are popular in our country because because it is a mean of transport that that normal person can afford.

✓ Yes, obviously bikes are popular in our country because they are a means of transport that a normal person can afford.

The sentence has article and singular/plural problems. Use plural 'they' to refer to bikes and 'means' (not 'mean') for 'method of transport'. Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'normal person'. Also remove duplicated words. Suggestion: match number between subject and verb and use correct noun form 'means'.

× It's cannot afford it and can go from one place to another place, so.

✓ They are affordable and allow people to go from one place to another.

The original uses 'It's cannot afford it' which misuses pronouns and modal structure. 'It' and 'they' are confused. Use 'they' to refer to bikes, and rephrase to 'allow people to go from one place to another'. Also avoid redundant 'place'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match their antecedents and use proper verb structures (subject + verb + complement).