Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always see bikes on the street and uh, I like. Yet.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接给出信息,且只是重复了考官的问题。要直接陈述并补充1-2个具体细节,比如什么时候有,如何使用或与谁一起骑。保持回答自然、简洁(不超过5句),使用连接词使陈述流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I used to ride it to school every day. In the evenings I often rode with my older brother, which helped me become more confident on the road.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且含糊,有停顿词“uh”和不完整句“I like. Yet.”。应先给出直接观点,然后用1-2个具体原因或例子支持,使用连接词(for example, because, so)使观点更连贯,并避免填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, I often see students and office workers cycling, and there are many bike lanes in the city which makes cycling convenient and safe.
× Did you have a bike when you were a child?
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.
原句学生把考官的问题原样重复,沒有直接回答。按照对过去事实的回答,应使用一般过去时(did / had)。建议直接回答并给出简短信息,例如:"Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child." 这样符合句子结构,有动词,语义清楚。
× Yes, I always see bikes on the street and uh, I like. Yet.
✓ Yes, I often see bikes on the street, and I like them.
学生原句存在结构不完整与代词缺失问题:"I like." 后面缺少宾语,应明确喜欢的对象;"Yet." 用法不当,句末不需要。并且时态应与一般事实一致,使用一般现在时(see, like)。建议将"always"改为更自然的频率副词"often"或根据语境保留"always",并在"like"后加宾语"them"(指代bikes)。最终句子应为:"Yes, I often see bikes on the street, and I like them."