Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and add one or two specific details (when, where, or who you rode with). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bike that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood. I remember racing my friends to the park most weekends, which made those years really fun.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a brief comparison. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use linking words like 'however', 'because', or 'for example' to structure your answer.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country nowadays. Although cycling used to be common in the past, fewer people ride bikes now because cities are more congested and people prefer motorbikes or cars. For example, most young people use scooters to commute, while only some older people still cycle for exercise.

× Yes, I had one when I was a child. I had a beautiful bike and uh, I was, uh, I was playing with that.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child. I had a beautiful bike and I used to play with it.

The speaker is describing a habitual action in the past. Use 'used to + base verb' or simple past habitual phrasing instead of repeated 'I was playing' which sounds unnatural and continuous. Also change the pronoun 'that' to 'it' for a bike. Suggestion: use 'I used to play with it' to express a past habitual action clearly.

× Not very much. By using bicycle in my country is not very common.

✓ Not very much. Using bicycles in my country is not very common.

The phrase 'By using bicycle in my country' is incorrect. Remove 'By' and use the gerund 'Using' plus plural 'bicycles' to refer generally to the activity. Also use plural when speaking generally about bicycles. Suggestion: say 'Using bicycles in my country is not very common.'

× It it was it was it, It used to be common, but not now among all old people and now old people and young people.

✓ It used to be common among older people, but not anymore; now it is not common among either older or younger people.

The original sentence contains repetitions and unclear structure. Remove repeated words and reorganize the sentence to show contrast between past and present. Use 'used to be' for past habitual state and 'not anymore' or 'now it is not common' for present. Clarify 'older people' and 'younger people' and use 'either' to show both groups are included. Suggestion: simplify and separate ideas: 'It used to be common among older people, but not anymore.'