Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Structure your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary words. Also correct basic grammar (e.g., "When I was a child," "I didn't have a bike," "I still don't have one"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and finish naturally without "Thank you."

Ví dụ: When I was a child I didn't have a bike, and I still don't own one. Although many people in my neighborhood ride bikes to get around, I never learned because I don't enjoy cycling. For that reason I don't plan to buy a bike in the future.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use correct vocabulary and linking words (e.g., "because," "for example"). Correct unclear phrases (e.g., "mentally used," "know how to hide a bike") to accurate expressions like "widely used". Limit to 3–4 sentences and avoid hesitation words or repeated fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Bangladesh because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and small shop owners use motorbikes to travel quickly through crowded streets. However, I personally never learned to ride one, so I don't use bikes myself.

× When I was child I didn't have any bike and still now I don't have any bike.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike and even now I don't have one.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and 'bike' (article errors, sentence structure). 'Any' is acceptable in negatives but 'a bike' and 'one' are more natural here. Also 'still now' is unidiomatic; use 'even now'. Use consistent nouns: avoid repeating 'any bike' twice.

× Everyone I see everyone use a bike but I don't like, I don't like riding on a bike and in future I will not buy any bike.

✓ Everyone I see uses a bike, but I don't like riding a bike, and in the future I will not buy one.

Run-on sentence and repetition 'Everyone I see everyone'. Subject-verb agreement: 'Everyone ... uses' (third person singular). Remove unnecessary comma after 'don't like'. Use 'in the future' (correct phrase) and replace 'any bike' with 'one' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, as I live in Bangladesh, bike is very mentally used for everyone who who know how to hide a bike.

✓ Yes, since I live in Bangladesh, bikes are commonly used by everyone who knows how to ride a bike.

Multiple issues: incorrect word 'mentally' likely intended 'commonly' (word choice). Singular/plural: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. Use passive/active structure 'are commonly used' or better 'are commonly used by everyone'. Subject-verb agreement: 'who knows' (third person singular). 'Hide' is wrong; context needs 'ride'.

× But but as I said earlier that I don't like bike that's why I I didn't learn to to ride bike so.

✓ But as I said earlier, I don't like bikes, which is why I didn't learn to ride a bike.

Remove repeated words 'But but' and 'I I' and duplicated 'to to'. Use plural 'bikes' for general statement. Use 'which is why' to connect clauses. Include article 'a' before 'bike' in 'ride a bike'. Past tense 'didn't learn' is correct but needs clearer connection to reason.