Part 1
Giám khảo
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Thí sinh
I don't wear T-shirts because I love shirts more than T-shirts and I wear T-shirts in my home becauses it is not make sense to wear shorts in my home. So I wear T-shirts when I go to sleep or staying at home just only.
Giám khảo
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I buy T-shirts because as I mentioned before, I used the them to staying at home wearing them. For going to sleep and it doesn't make sense to wearing shirts that I prefer more in the house or indoors.
Giám khảo
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Thí sinh
I think older people in my country don't wear T-shirts they wear. Shirt is more than T-shirt is an. I think it is a traditional way in our country is that older people prefer that.
Giám khảo
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. When I was a kid I usually wear T-shirts, but I prefer wear shirts when I grow up. I find it very good for me and very formal and convertible with for me. But now I do.
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your sentences concise. For example, explain your preference clearly and give specific reasons without repeating the same idea.
Ví dụ: I rarely wear T-shirts because I prefer shirts. However, I do wear T-shirts at home, especially when I sleep, since they are more comfortable indoors.
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Avoid repeating previous answers and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and avoid grammatical mistakes. Be specific about how often you buy T-shirts and why.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I mainly wear them at home for comfort, especially when I go to sleep. I find shirts less suitable for relaxing indoors.
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using proper linking words and correct grammar. Provide specific reasons or cultural explanations to support your opinion.
Ví dụ: In my country, older people usually prefer wearing shirts rather than T-shirts because it is a traditional style that reflects their generation's fashion.
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making your ideas clearer. Use linking words to contrast your past and present preferences and explain reasons specifically.
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts often as a kid. However, as I grew up, I started to prefer shirts because they look more formal and suit me better now.
× I don't wear T-shirts because I love shirts more than T-shirts and I wear T-shirts in my home becauses it is not make sense to wear shorts in my home.
✓ I don't wear T-shirts because I love shirts more than T-shirts, and I wear T-shirts at home because it does not make sense to wear shorts at home.
The original sentence incorrectly used 'becauses' instead of 'because' and lacked proper punctuation to separate clauses. Also, 'in my home' is better expressed as 'at home'. The phrase 'it is not make sense' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it does not make sense'. Using correct conjunctions and punctuation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× So I wear T-shirts when I go to sleep or staying at home just only.
✓ So I wear T-shirts when I go to sleep or stay at home only.
The phrase 'or staying at home' incorrectly uses the -ing form after 'or'. After 'or', the base form of the verb should be used to maintain parallel structure. Also, 'just only' is redundant; 'only' suffices.
× Yes, I buy T-shirts because as I mentioned before, I used the them to staying at home wearing them.
✓ Yes, I buy T-shirts because, as I mentioned before, I use them to stay at home wearing them.
The phrase 'I used the them' is incorrect; 'the' is unnecessary before 'them'. Also, 'to staying' should be 'to stay' because after 'to' the base verb form is used. Correct pronoun usage and verb forms are essential for clarity.
× For going to sleep and it doesn't make sense to wearing shirts that I prefer more in the house or indoors.
✓ For going to sleep, and it doesn't make sense to wear shirts that I prefer more in the house or indoors.
After 'to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. Therefore, 'to wearing' should be 'to wear'. This correction maintains proper infinitive verb form.
× I think older people in my country don't wear T-shirts they wear.
✓ I think older people in my country don't wear T-shirts; they wear shirts.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation, causing confusion. Adding a semicolon and completing the second clause clarifies the meaning.
× Shirt is more than T-shirt is an.
✓ Shirts are more common than T-shirts.
The original sentence has singular/plural inconsistency and unclear structure. Using plural nouns and a clear comparative structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× I think it is a traditional way in our country is that older people prefer that.
✓ I think it is a traditional way in our country that older people prefer.
The original sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing. Removing the extra 'is' and simplifying the sentence improves readability and correctness.
× When I was a kid I usually wear T-shirts, but I prefer wear shirts when I grow up.
✓ When I was a kid, I usually wore T-shirts, but I preferred wearing shirts when I grew up.
The sentence refers to past habits, so past tense verbs 'wore', 'preferred', and 'grew' should be used. Also, 'prefer wear' is incorrect; it should be 'preferred wearing' or 'preferred to wear'.
× I find it very good for me and very formal and convertible with for me.
✓ I find it very good for me, very formal, and versatile for me.
The phrase 'convertible with for me' is incorrect and unclear. 'Versatile' is a better adjective here, and the preposition 'for me' is sufficient. Also, commas separate the adjectives for clarity.