Part 1
Giám khảo
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm the person who always want to wear comfortable clothes in which I feel confident. So I delete your T-shirts. Like I have my house T-shirts and like when I go for outing that type of T-shirts. So I can say that ideally wear T-shirts.
Giám khảo
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I buy T-shirts whenever arm found any new. Print off T-shirt I just grab that he should be 'cause I am T-shirt lovers so I can say that I buy T-shirt when I was 30 should attracted me or the quality of that ticket is good.
Giám khảo
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Thí sinh
Older people in my country prefers to wear a simple T-shirts with no printing design and moreover if I talk about fashion able. So I think they are not more fashionable than younger what they are quite medium like fashionable.
Giám khảo
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Definitely, my mother used to bore me a T-shirt when I was a kid. Like they pick a trendy and stylish T-shirt for me which look attractive on me and they also took a lot of pictures while wore me different kind of T-shirts, all that kind of stuff.
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say how often you wear T-shirts and give specific occasions with linking words to make your answer coherent.
Ví dụ: I usually wear T-shirts almost every day because I find them very comfortable. For instance, I wear casual T-shirts at home and more stylish ones when I go out with friends.
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a direct answer first, then add specific reasons using linking words. Also, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to improve clarity.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy T-shirts whenever I find a new design that attracts me. Moreover, I pay attention to the quality to ensure it lasts long.
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points but needs better sentence structure and linking words for coherence. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details using linking words like 'however' or 'moreover'.
Ví dụ: Older people in my country prefer simple T-shirts without prints. Moreover, they are generally less fashionable compared to younger people, who like more trendy styles.
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Start with a direct answer, then add specific supporting details with linking words.
Ví dụ: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. My mother used to buy trendy and stylish T-shirts for me, and she often took pictures of me wearing different kinds of T-shirts.
× Well, I'm the person who always want to wear comfortable clothes in which I feel confident.
✓ Well, I'm the person who always wants to wear comfortable clothes in which I feel confident.
The verb 'want' should be in the third person singular form 'wants' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.
× So I delete your T-shirts.
✓ So I prefer your T-shirts.
The verb 'delete' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb to express liking or choosing is 'prefer'. Also, 'prefer' does not require a preposition in this context.
× Like I have my house T-shirts and like when I go for outing that type of T-shirts.
✓ Like I have my house T-shirts and when I go for an outing, that type of T-shirts.
The phrase 'for outing' is missing the article 'an' before 'outing'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding a comma improves clarity.
× So I can say that ideally wear T-shirts.
✓ So I can say that I ideally wear T-shirts.
The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before the verb 'wear'. Every sentence needs a subject to be complete.
× Definitely, I buy T-shirts whenever arm found any new.
✓ Definitely, I buy T-shirts whenever I find any new ones.
The word 'arm' is incorrect here; it should be the pronoun 'I'. Also, 'found' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'find' is appropriate.
× Print off T-shirt I just grab that he should be 'cause I am T-shirt lovers so I can say that I buy T-shirt when I was 30 should attracted me or the quality of that ticket is good.
✓ If I find a printed T-shirt, I just grab it because I am a T-shirt lover. So I can say that I buy T-shirts when they attract me or the quality of the fabric is good.
The phrase 'Print off T-shirt' is incorrect; 'printed T-shirt' is correct. 'He should be' is incorrect and replaced with 'it'. 'T-shirt lovers' should be singular 'lover' to match 'I'. 'When I was 30' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'when they attract me'. 'Ticket' is a wrong word here; 'fabric' is appropriate.
× Older people in my country prefers to wear a simple T-shirts with no printing design and moreover if I talk about fashion able.
✓ Older people in my country prefer to wear simple T-shirts with no printed designs and moreover, if I talk about fashionability.
The verb 'prefers' should be 'prefer' to agree with plural subject 'older people'. 'A simple T-shirts' is incorrect; 'simple T-shirts' is correct without 'a'. 'Printing design' should be 'printed designs'. 'Fashion able' is incorrect; 'fashionability' or 'fashion sense' is appropriate.
× So I think they are not more fashionable than younger what they are quite medium like fashionable.
✓ So I think they are not more fashionable than younger people; they are quite moderately fashionable.
The phrase 'younger what they are' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'younger people'. 'Quite medium like fashionable' is awkward; 'quite moderately fashionable' is better. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two ideas.
× Definitely, my mother used to bore me a T-shirt when I was a kid.
✓ Definitely, my mother used to buy me a T-shirt when I was a kid.
The verb 'bore' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'buy' to indicate giving clothes. 'Used to' requires the base form of the verb.
× Like they pick a trendy and stylish T-shirt for me which look attractive on me and they also took a lot of pictures while wore me different kind of T-shirts, all that kind of stuff.
✓ They used to pick trendy and stylish T-shirts for me which looked attractive on me, and they also took a lot of pictures while I wore different kinds of T-shirts, all that kind of stuff.
'Pick' should be past tense 'used to pick' to match 'used to'. 'Which look' should be 'which looked' to maintain past tense. 'While wore me' is incorrect; it should be 'while I wore'. 'Different kind of T-shirts' should be 'different kinds of T-shirts' to match plural form.