Part 1
Giám khảo
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Thí sinh
I always wear T-shirt in summer. However I live in in Lantern. This is a distinguished season city, so in winter I seldom wear T-shirts.
Giám khảo
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I can afford it due to they are cheaper than other types of clothes. I also like the T-shirts because there are a variety of shapes and colors. It is very easy for me.
Giám khảo
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Thí sinh
Actually, in my country, the T-shirt is suitable for any person no matter who or young or or old because the T-shirt T-shirts are convenient and comfortable to wear in the summer.
Giám khảo
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, in the past I always wore T-shirt at any occasions, for example when we when I was at home or was ready to play outside because the T-shirt is convenient for me besides.
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如重复使用介词"in",以及"distinguished season city"表达不准确。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达方式,并注意时态和单复数形式。
Ví dụ: I always wear T-shirts in summer because the weather is hot. However, I live in Lantern, which has cold winters, so I rarely wear T-shirts during that season.
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"due to they are"应为"because they are",以及表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并注意代词和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are cheaper than other types of clothes. Also, I like them because they come in various styles and colors, which makes it easy for me to choose.
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误,如"who or young or or old"和"the T-shirt T-shirts"。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: In my country, T-shirts are suitable for everyone, whether young or old, because they are convenient and comfortable to wear, especially in summer.
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如"at any occasions"应为"on any occasion",以及句子结构混乱。建议简化句子,使用正确的介词和连词,使表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a kid, I always wore T-shirts on any occasion, such as when I was at home or playing outside, because they were very comfortable.
× I always wear T-shirt in summer.
✓ I always wear T-shirts in summer.
这里的T-shirt是可数名词,表示多件T恤衫,应该用复数形式T-shirts。
× However I live in in Lantern.
✓ However, I live in Lantern.
这里有重复的介词'in',应去掉一个。另外,句首插入语后应加逗号。
× This is a distinguished season city, so in winter I seldom wear T-shirts.
✓ This is a distinguished seasonal city, so in winter I seldom wear T-shirts.
这里的season应改为seasonal,表示“季节性的”,是形容词形式。
× Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I can afford it due to they are cheaper than other types of clothes.
✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I can afford them as they are cheaper than other types of clothes.
T-shirts是复数,代词应使用复数them;另外,连接词用as更合适。
× I also like the T-shirts because there are a variety of shapes and colors.
✓ I also like T-shirts because there are a variety of shapes and colors.
这里不需要定冠词the,泛指T-shirts时用复数形式即可。
× It is very easy for me.
✓ They are very easy for me.
前文指的是T-shirts,复数,代词应使用they。
× Actually, in my country, the T-shirt is suitable for any person no matter who or young or or old because the T-shirt T-shirts are convenient and comfortable to wear in the summer.
✓ Actually, in my country, T-shirts are suitable for any person, no matter young or old, because T-shirts are convenient and comfortable to wear in the summer.
这里应使用复数形式T-shirts,且句子中重复出现the T-shirt,需删除多余部分。
× Yes, in the past I always wore T-shirt at any occasions, for example when we when I was at home or was ready to play outside because the T-shirt is convenient for me besides.
✓ Yes, in the past I always wore T-shirts on any occasion, for example when I was at home or ready to play outside because T-shirts were convenient for me.
occasion应为单数形式on any occasion;去掉多余的we;保持时态一致,过去时用were;去掉句尾多余的besides。