Part 1
Giám khảo
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Thí sinh
So I wear T-shirt quite frequently. So they are very comfortable and versatile. So I tend to wear AT shirt when the weather a little bit coolers. So I cannot wear AT shirt in the winter because it's too cold. So usually I prefer in the summer or the springs.
Giám khảo
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Thí sinh
So I buy T-shirts every years at the beginning of summer. I usually purchase like 5 to 10 every years just to have a different style, different printing on the on the shirt and I can change the color as I want when I follow the shoe that I go with.
Giám khảo
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Thí sinh
So for older people in my country, I don't think they really care about the shirt that they wear. So for fashionable reason, I don't think it's, I don't think the older people really care about those.
Giám khảo
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
So yes, I did wear a T-shirt when I were kissed, so it's one of my closets will contain T-shirts. So I usually wear it every day except for school time because I have a uniform.
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ "so" quá nhiều lần và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "a T-shirt" thay vì "AT shirt". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I wear T-shirts quite frequently because they are comfortable and versatile. I usually wear them in the summer or spring when the weather is warm. However, I avoid wearing T-shirts in winter because it is too cold.
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ "every year" thay vì "every years". Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.
Ví dụ: I usually buy T-shirts at the beginning of each summer. I purchase around five to ten to have different styles and colors that match the shoes I wear.
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và từ ngữ, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm một số lý do hoặc ví dụ để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.
Ví dụ: In my country, older people usually do not pay much attention to fashion, including T-shirts. They prefer comfort over style, so T-shirts are not considered very fashionable among them.
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp quá khứ, ví dụ "when I was a kid" thay vì "when I were kissed". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. They were a big part of my wardrobe, and I usually wore them every day except during school hours because I had to wear a uniform.
× So I wear T-shirt quite frequently.
✓ So I wear T-shirts quite frequently.
The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the sentence talks about wearing them frequently in general, implying more than one.
× So I tend to wear AT shirt when the weather a little bit coolers.
✓ So I tend to wear a T-shirt when the weather is a little bit cooler.
The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'T-shirt' and 'coolers' should be 'cooler' as it is a comparative adjective describing the weather.
× So I cannot wear AT shirt in the winter because it's too cold.
✓ So I cannot wear a T-shirt in the winter because it's too cold.
The article 'a' is missing before 'T-shirt' which is necessary for singular countable nouns.
× So usually I prefer in the summer or the springs.
✓ So usually I prefer it in the summer or the spring.
The verb 'prefer' requires an object; 'it' refers to the T-shirt. Also, 'spring' should be singular without 'the' when talking about seasons generally.
× So I buy T-shirts every years at the beginning of summer.
✓ So I buy T-shirts every year at the beginning of summer.
'Every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'years' should be 'year'.
× I usually purchase like 5 to 10 every years just to have a different style, different printing on the on the shirt and I can change the color as I want when I follow the shoe that I go with.
✓ I usually purchase like 5 to 10 every year just to have different styles, different prints on the shirts and I can change the color as I want to match the shoes I go with.
'Every years' should be 'every year'. 'Style' and 'printing' should be plural to match '5 to 10'. 'On the on the shirt' is redundant and should be 'on the shirts'. 'Follow the shoe' is incorrect; 'match the shoes' is appropriate.
× So for older people in my country, I don't think they really care about the shirt that they wear.
✓ So for older people in my country, I don't think they really care about the shirts that they wear.
'Shirt' should be plural 'shirts' because it refers to the general clothing older people wear.
× So for fashionable reason, I don't think it's, I don't think the older people really care about those.
✓ So for fashion reasons, I don't think the older people really care about those.
'Fashionable reason' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fashion reasons'. Also, the repeated 'I don't think' is redundant and removed for clarity.
× So yes, I did wear a T-shirt when I were kissed, so it's one of my closets will contain T-shirts.
✓ So yes, I did wear a T-shirt when I was a kid, so one of my closets contained T-shirts.
'Were kissed' is incorrect; it should be 'was a kid'. 'It's one of my closets will contain' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'one of my closets contained' to match past tense.
× So I usually wear it every day except for school time because I have a uniform.
✓ So I usually wear them every day except during school time because I have a uniform.
'It' refers to T-shirts and should be plural 'them'. 'Except for school time' is better expressed as 'except during school time'.