Part 1
Giám khảo
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Nowadays, most people opt for purchasing T-shirts instead of other clothes, and in contrast of these people, I frequently wearing I I frequently wear sweatshirts instead of T-shirts because it's, umm, keeps me warm.
Giám khảo
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Thí sinh
Nope, I I don't usually prefer to buy T-shirts. My first choice including is wearing tops which my idol wears a lot and instead of T-shirts. The reason why I chose tops is it gives me plausible wipes and comfortable.
Giám khảo
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Thí sinh
I'm currently observing that most people in my country prefer to wear T-shirts and I don't know the reason why they chose this, but I think they find it uncomfortable and they think the T-shirts suits them very well.
Giám khảo
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Similar to many Childs, uh, I also wear them because they see children very well and it's uh easiness for parents instead of like dresses and not the sole.
How often do you wear T-shirts?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırın ve gereksiz ifadelerden kaçının.
Ví dụ: I don't wear T-shirts very often. Instead, I usually prefer sweatshirts because they keep me warm, especially in cooler weather.
Do you often buy T-shirts?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Cümlenizde anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha açık ve net ifadeler kullanarak, neden T-shirt yerine başka kıyafetleri tercih ettiğinizi açıklayın. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.
Ví dụ: I don't often buy T-shirts. I prefer wearing tops similar to those my idol wears because they are comfortable and suit my style better.
How fashionable are T-shirts for older people in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda çelişkili ifadeler var ve anlam net değil. Daha tutarlı ve mantıklı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi bağlayın.
Ví dụ: In my country, many older people like wearing T-shirts because they find them comfortable and suitable for casual occasions.
Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Cümleniz dilbilgisi açısından hatalı ve anlamı belirsiz. Daha basit ve doğru cümleler kurarak, çocukken T-shirt giymenizin nedenlerini açıkça ifade edin.
Ví dụ: Like many children, I used to wear T-shirts because they were comfortable and easy for my parents to dress me in, compared to other clothes.
× Nowadays, most people opt for purchasing T-shirts instead of other clothes, and in contrast of these people, I frequently wearing I I frequently wear sweatshirts instead of T-shirts because it's, umm, keeps me warm.
✓ Nowadays, most people opt for purchasing T-shirts instead of other clothes, and in contrast to these people, I frequently wear sweatshirts instead of T-shirts because it keeps me warm.
'Frequently wearing' is incorrect here; the verb should be in base form after 'I'. Also, 'in contrast of' should be 'in contrast to'. 'It's, umm, keeps me warm' is incorrect; it should be 'it keeps me warm' because 'it' is the subject and 'keeps' is the verb. 'I I' is a repetition error.
× Nowadays, most people opt for purchasing T-shirts instead of other clothes, and in contrast of these people, I frequently wearing I I frequently wear sweatshirts instead of T-shirts because it's, umm, keeps me warm.
✓ Nowadays, most people opt for purchasing T-shirts instead of other clothes, and in contrast to these people, I frequently wear sweatshirts instead of T-shirts because it keeps me warm.
'In contrast of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in contrast to'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.
× Nope, I I don't usually prefer to buy T-shirts. My first choice including is wearing tops which my idol wears a lot and instead of T-shirts.
✓ Nope, I don't usually prefer to buy T-shirts. My first choice is wearing tops which my idol wears a lot instead of T-shirts.
'I I' is a repetition error. Also, 'My first choice including is wearing tops' is incorrect; 'including' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. The pronoun usage is fine but the sentence structure needs correction.
× The reason why I chose tops is it gives me plausible wipes and comfortable.
✓ The reason why I choose tops is that they give me a pleasant vibe and are comfortable.
'Plausible wipes' is incorrect and nonsensical. Likely intended 'pleasant vibes'. Also, 'comfortable' should be linked properly with 'are' to describe 'tops'. The adjective usage is incorrect and needs correction.
× I'm currently observing that most people in my country prefer to wear T-shirts and I don't know the reason why they chose this, but I think they find it uncomfortable and they think the T-shirts suits them very well.
✓ I'm currently observing that most people in my country prefer to wear T-shirts and I don't know the reason why they choose this, but I think they find it uncomfortable and they think the T-shirts suit them very well.
'Chose' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'choose'. Also, 'T-shirts suits' should be 'T-shirts suit' because 'T-shirts' is plural and requires plural verb form.
× I'm currently observing that most people in my country prefer to wear T-shirts and I don't know the reason why they chose this, but I think they find it uncomfortable and they think the T-shirts suits them very well.
✓ I'm currently observing that most people in my country prefer to wear T-shirts and I don't know the reason why they choose this, but I think they find it uncomfortable and they think the T-shirts suit them very well.
'T-shirts' is plural, so the verb should be 'suit' not 'suits'. Subject-verb agreement must be maintained.
× Similar to many Childs, uh, I also wear them because they see children very well and it's uh easiness for parents instead of like dresses and not the sole.
✓ Similar to many children, I also wore them because they suit children very well and it's easier for parents instead of dresses and shoes.
'Childs' is incorrect plural; correct plural is 'children'. 'Wear' should be past tense 'wore' to match 'when you were a kid'. 'See children very well' is incorrect; likely intended 'suit children very well'. 'Easiness' is a noun but 'easier' (adjective) fits better here. 'Not the sole' is unclear; likely meant 'shoes'.