Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Thí sinh
Absolutely not. I think I'm not good at remembering numbers. Actually, I have trouble in remembering something, especially numbers.
Giám khảo
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I think inevitably to remember some numbers.
Giám khảo
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. To be honest, I was an excellent student when I was a child, so I'm interested in learning math because I think it is challenging and fancy.
Giám khảo
Which numbers are important to you?
Thí sinh
Well, that's an interesting question. I think my favorite number is 4. It's my lucky number. I usually choose this number when I have no idea to choose what.
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达相同意思,如“I'm not good at remembering numbers”和“I have trouble in remembering something, especially numbers”意思重复。可以简洁明了地表达观点,并适当扩展细节。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers because I often forget them quickly, especially phone numbers or codes.
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法不准确,且表达不完整。应直接回答问题,并用完整句子表达观点,同时补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will definitely need to use numbers in my future work, such as calculating budgets or analyzing data.
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中“fancy”用词不当,且句子结构不够自然。应使用更合适的词汇描述兴趣,并避免不必要的自我评价。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed studying math because I found it challenging and interesting, which motivated me to learn more.
Which numbers are important to you?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然,但最后一句表达不够清晰,应更准确地说明使用数字4的情境。
Ví dụ: My favorite number is 4 because I consider it lucky, so I often pick it when I need to make a random choice.
× Actually, I have trouble in remembering something, especially numbers.
✓ Actually, I have trouble remembering something, especially numbers.
在英语中,'have trouble'后面直接跟动词的-ing形式,不需要介词'in'。因此,'have trouble in remembering'应改为'have trouble remembering'。
× Yes, of course, I think inevitably to remember some numbers.
✓ Yes, of course, I think I will inevitably have to remember some numbers.
表达将来时态时,'think'后面应使用完整的句子结构,且'inevitably to remember'结构不正确,应改为'will inevitably have to remember'以表达将来必须做某事。
× To be honest, I was an excellent student when I was a child, so I'm interested in learning math because I think it is challenging and fancy.
✓ To be honest, I was an excellent student when I was a child, so I'm interested in learning math because I think it is challenging and fun.
'Fancy'作为形容词通常表示'花哨的',在这里表达兴趣时用'fun'更合适。虽然这不是严格的语法错误,但属于词汇使用错误,建议用更合适的形容词。
× I usually choose this number when I have no idea to choose what.
✓ I usually choose this number when I have no idea what to choose.
'have no idea to choose what'的结构不正确,正确表达应为'have no idea what to choose',即疑问词+不定式结构。