Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Thí sinh
No I I have a bad memories and I I can't remember any any. I can't remember any trouble things especially numbers because I think the number is very flexible and hard to remember.
Giám khảo
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Thí sinh
MMM maybe 'cause I am a doctor I need to remember some numbers, table numbers from patient, from my patients and making a call from son to release their need and make an array.
Giám khảo
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not really good at maths 'cause I think it's very hard to study and I had bad memories. I can't remember any complex numbers so I don't enjoy studying maths.
Giám khảo
Which numbers are important to you?
Thí sinh
Maybe my son's birthday birthday number. I should remember his birthday and make a birthday party for him every year.
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并避免重复。可以用更准确的词汇描述记忆数字的困难。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at remembering numbers because they are flexible and hard to recall.
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,句子结构混乱,表达含糊。建议直接回答问题,并用连词连接句子,说明具体如何使用数字。
Ví dụ: Yes, as a doctor, I need to remember patients' numbers and use them to manage appointments and communicate effectively.
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为直接,但缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议使用连接词丰富表达,并具体说明为什么不喜欢数学。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't enjoy studying math because I found it difficult and struggled to remember complex numbers.
Which numbers are important to you?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有重复词汇,表达可以更自然。建议简洁表达并补充原因。
Ví dụ: My son's birthday is important to me because I want to celebrate it with a party every year.
× No I I have a bad memories and I I can't remember any any.
✓ No, I have bad memories and I can't remember any.
这里的'memories'是复数,但前面用了不定冠词'a',这是错误的。应去掉'a',因为'memories'是复数名词。
× I can't remember any any.
✓ I can't remember any.
这里重复了'any',应去掉重复的词。
× I can't remember any trouble things especially numbers because I think the number is very flexible and hard to remember.
✓ I can't remember any troublesome things, especially numbers, because I think numbers are very flexible and hard to remember.
'trouble things'应改为'troublesome things',形容词形式;'the number'应改为复数'numbers',因为指的是一般的数字。
× I need to remember some numbers, table numbers from patient, from my patients and making a call from son to release their need and make an array.
✓ I need to remember some numbers, table numbers from patients, and make a call from my son to release their needs and make an array.
'patient'应为复数'patients',因为指多个病人;'making'应改为'make',保持句子结构一致。
× and making a call from son to release their need and make an array.
✓ and make a call from my son to release their needs and make an array.
这里'making'用法不当,应与前面的动词保持一致,改为'make'。
× No, I'm not really good at maths 'cause I think it's very hard to study and I had bad memories.
✓ No, I'm not really good at maths because I think it's very hard to study and I have bad memories.
'had'是过去时,与上下文时态不符,应改为现在时'have'。
× I can't remember any complex numbers so I don't enjoy studying maths.
✓ I can't remember any complex numbers, so I don't enjoy studying maths.
句子中缺少逗号,添加逗号使句子更通顺。
× Maybe my son's birthday birthday number.
✓ Maybe my son's birthday number.
'birthday'重复,应去掉一个。
× I should remember his birthday and make a birthday party for him every year.
✓ I should remember his birthday and throw a birthday party for him every year.
'make a birthday party'表达不自然,通常用'throw a party'表示举办派对。