Number— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "at that time" twice and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I have a sharp memory. Moreover, my primary school teacher taught me some effective tricks to help me remember numbers easily.

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Avoid filler words like "uh" and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about how numbers are used in healthcare.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. In my future work in the healthcare sector, I will use numbers frequently, such as calculating dosages and managing financial accounts. Therefore, numbers play an important role in my professional life.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about what aspects of math you enjoyed.

Ví dụ: Definitely, I enjoyed studying mathematics as a child because I liked arithmetic operations such as addition, subtraction, and multiplication. I found solving calculations very interesting.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to be more specific and structured. Use linking words and avoid hesitation sounds. Give a clear example to support your point.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, all numbers are important because they help us in daily life. For example, remembering my mobile phone number is essential for communication.

× Yes, of course I'm good at remembering number because first of all I have a sharp memory.

✓ Yes, of course I'm good at remembering numbers because first of all I have a sharp memory.

The word 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple digits or figures, not just one. In English, when talking about the general ability to remember digits, the plural form is used.

× And my future work I will use some numbers because, uh, I would like to work in healthcare sector.

✓ In my future work, I will use some numbers because, uh, I would like to work in the healthcare sector.

The phrase 'my future work I will use' is awkward and lacks proper sentence structure. Adding 'In' at the beginning and a comma improves clarity. Also, 'healthcare sector' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific sector.

× So numbers are quite important like calculation for financial or accountant.

✓ So numbers are quite important like calculations for finance or accounting.

'Calculation' should be plural 'calculations' because it refers to multiple instances. 'Financial' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'finance'. 'Accountant' is a person, but here the intended meaning is the field, so 'accounting' is correct.

× Definitely when I was a child at that time I loved to studying mathematics subject because I love arithmetic, like how to solve sounds like addition and subtraction, multiply and I found a calculation more interesting.

✓ Definitely, when I was a child, I loved studying mathematics because I love arithmetic, like how to solve problems such as addition, subtraction, and multiplication, and I found calculations more interesting.

The phrase 'loved to studying' is incorrect; it should be 'loved studying' because 'love' is followed by the gerund form. 'Mathematics subject' is redundant; 'mathematics' alone suffices. 'Sounds like' is incorrect here; 'such as' is appropriate to give examples. 'Multiply' should be 'multiplication' to match the noun form. 'A calculation' should be plural 'calculations' to refer generally.

× Uh, as per my perception, I think that, uh, all numbered plays an integral role in the life of people and all numbers are important for me because with the assistance of all numbers, it makes some meaningful, uh, number, uh, for example, to remember my mobile phone number it.

✓ Uh, as per my perception, I think that all numbers play an integral role in people's lives and all numbers are important to me because with the assistance of all numbers, I can make some meaningful numbers; for example, to remember my mobile phone number.

'All numbered' is incorrect; it should be 'all numbers' (plural noun). 'Plays' should be 'play' to agree with plural subject 'numbers' (subject-verb agreement). 'In the life of people' is better expressed as 'in people's lives'. 'It makes some meaningful number' is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrased to 'I can make some meaningful numbers'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.