Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at remembering numbers and calculating numbers too.
Giám khảo
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Thí sinh
Yes I will actually. I work as an accountant so my job is every day to dealing with numbers.
Giám khảo
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I was good at math when I was young. For example, I always got high school in my final exam.
Giám khảo
Which numbers are important to you?
Thí sinh
Well I think the most important number to me is my parents cell phone number and also the birth birthdays numbers. Umm with my friends.
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且重复使用了“numbers”,缺乏多样性和具体细节。建议避免重复词汇,增加具体例子来丰富回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a strong memory for numbers and can quickly perform calculations. For instance, I can easily remember phone numbers and do mental math without a calculator.
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,如“to dealing”应为“dealing”。回答缺乏连贯性和细节,建议使用连接词并补充具体工作内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will definitely use numbers in my future work because I am an accountant. Every day, I analyze financial data and prepare reports that involve complex calculations.
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误,如“got high school”不合适。建议使用更准确的表达并补充具体经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I found it interesting. For example, I often scored high marks in my math exams at school.
Which numbers are important to you?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且表达混乱,存在语法和词汇错误。建议理清思路,使用连接词,并具体说明为什么这些数字重要。
Ví dụ: The most important numbers to me are my parents' phone numbers and my friends' birthdays because they help me stay connected and remember special occasions.
× I work as an accountant so my job is every day to dealing with numbers.
✓ I work as an accountant so my job every day is dealing with numbers.
动词短语中,'to dealing'是不正确的,应该用动名词形式'dealing',且句子结构需要调整,使动名词作表语。
× For example, I always got high school in my final exam.
✓ For example, I always got high scores in my final exam.
这里的'got high school'表达错误,应该是'got high scores',表示获得高分。'got'是过去式,符合句子时态。
× Well I think the most important number to me is my parents cell phone number and also the birth birthdays numbers.
✓ Well I think the most important numbers to me are my parents' cell phone numbers and also the birthdays of my friends.
'number'应为复数'numbers',因为提到了多个号码。'parents'后面应加所有格符号'parents'','birth birthdays numbers'表达混乱,应改为'birthdays of my friends'。