News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct English to express your interest in news.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am very interested in news. I like to follow current events happening in my country to stay informed about important issues.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain clearly how you find news and which sources you trust.

Ví dụ: I usually find news through trusted news channels because some sources provide false information. Therefore, I only rely on reliable news outlets.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Give a clear reason and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to be a journalist because I am a civil engineer and have already chosen my career path.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Use simple sentences and avoid repeating phrases. Provide specific details about the news you read.

Ví dụ: Yes, I read the news this morning about the weather forecast and the political situation in my country.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain why you discuss news with friends.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often talk with my friends and colleagues about the news to help them stay informed about politics and weather forecasts.

× Yes, I'm very much engaging new as active.

✓ Yes, I'm very much engaged and active in news.

The phrase 'very much engaging new as active' is incorrect. 'Engaging' is a verb form, but here the adjective 'engaged' is appropriate to describe the student's involvement. Also, 'new' should be 'news'. The correct phrase is 'very much engaged and active in news.'

× Civilian I I'm I'm very much active India Today news that is happening in our country to get informed about the situation that my country is offering in where I'm standing right now.

✓ As a civilian, I am very active in following India Today news that is happening in our country to stay informed about the situation where I am currently living.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Civilian I I'm I'm' is incorrect; it should be 'As a civilian, I am'. Also, 'to get informed about the situation that my country is offering in where I'm standing right now' is awkward; it should be 'to stay informed about the situation where I am currently living.'

× Therefore, I'm very much.

✓ Therefore, I am very much involved.

The sentence 'Therefore, I'm very much.' is incomplete and unclear. It needs an object or complement to complete the thought, such as 'involved' or 'interested.'

× Usually news are very much logistik, but some of the news source false data.

✓ Usually, news is very logistical, but some news sources provide false data.

'News' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is'. 'News source' should be plural 'news sources' to match 'some of'. Also, 'logistik' is likely a misspelling of 'logistical'.

× So I don't believe in most of the news, but especially some of the new channel that I strongly believe in.

✓ So I don't believe most of the news, but there are some news channels that I strongly believe in.

The phrase 'believe in most of the news' is incorrect; 'believe most of the news' is better. Also, 'some of the new channel' should be 'some news channels'. The preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'believe in' but the sentence structure needs adjustment.

× Therefore, my choice in news is very much. I said.

✓ Therefore, I am very selective about my choice of news sources.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'My choice in news is very much. I said.' does not convey a clear meaning. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× No, I don't prefer to be a journalist because I am a civil engineer myself, so I already have chosen my. Korea the FU.

✓ No, I don't prefer to be a journalist because I am a civil engineer myself, so I have already chosen my career path.

The phrase 'I already have chosen my. Korea the FU.' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'I have already chosen my career path.'

× Yes, I did read the news this morning of the weather that I might go through and about the political situation of our country.

✓ Yes, I read the news this morning about the weather I might experience and the political situation of our country.

The phrase 'did read' is acceptable but 'read' is more natural here. 'Of the weather that I might go through' is awkward; 'about the weather I might experience' is better.

× Therefore I'm actively. Therefore, I'm active in a news.

✓ Therefore, I am actively following the news. Therefore, I am active in keeping up with the news.

The original sentences are incomplete and awkward. 'I'm actively' needs an object or complement. 'Active in a news' is incorrect; 'active in keeping up with the news' is better.

× Yes, I frequently Yep about the news with my colleagues or with my friends so that they stay informed about the political situation that is going on in our country and also the weather forecast that might happen in the future to make them aloud.

✓ Yes, I frequently talk about the news with my colleagues and friends so that they stay informed about the political situation in our country and the weather forecast that might happen in the future to keep them aware.

'Yep' is incorrect here; likely meant 'talk'. 'Make them aloud' is incorrect; 'keep them aware' or 'keep them informed' is appropriate. Also, 'with my colleagues or with my friends' can be simplified to 'with my colleagues and friends.'

× Therefore, I have done talk with my friends about the news.

✓ Therefore, I have talked with my friends about the news.

'Have done talk' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'have talked.'