News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy cố gắng dùng từ vựng phù hợp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not very interested in the news because I find some of it quite boring and irrelevant to my life.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh để trả lời. Câu trả lời hiện tại có lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp khiến ý không rõ ràng. Hãy nói rõ bạn dùng nền tảng nào và cách bạn tìm tin tức.

Ví dụ: I usually find news on Facebook or other social media platforms where news articles are shared frequently.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ để câu tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I don't enjoy going outside every day to record videos or report news. Also, I'm not an extroverted person.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và dùng từ đúng để diễn đạt ý của mình.

Ví dụ: Actually, I haven't read the news this morning because I'm not very interested in news in general.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không đúng, làm ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý muốn nói.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because some news stories impress me and I want to share my feelings about them.

× Because I think that some of the news.

✓ Because I think that some of the news is boring.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb, making it incomplete. It should be combined with the following sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× Are quite boring an I really hearts I focus on the news because it is so lame for me.

✓ They are quite boring and I really hate to focus on the news because it is so lame for me.

'News' is singular and uncountable, so 'are' should be 'is' if referring to 'news' as a whole. However, 'some of the news' can be treated as plural items, so 'they are' is acceptable. 'Hearts' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'hate'. The sentence also has multiple errors and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I usually served Facebook or on some social media platform to fire news.

✓ I usually surf Facebook or some social media platforms to find news.

'Served' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'surf' when referring to browsing the internet. 'Fire news' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'find news'. Also, 'on some social media platform' should be 'some social media platforms' for plural consistency.

× No, I wouldn't because I'm not really keen on being a journalist.

✓ No, I wouldn't because I'm not really keen on being a journalist.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I don't really want to go outside everyday and recording some videos or news.

✓ I don't really want to go outside every day and record some videos or news.

After 'and', the verb should be in base form 'record' to parallel 'go'. 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the correct adverb is 'every day'.

× Yes, I'm just not really an extrovert person enough.

✓ Yes, I'm just not really extroverted enough.

'Extrovert' is a noun; the adjective form 'extroverted' should be used. 'Person' is unnecessary here.

× Actually I haven't because I said I'm not really keen on news so I'm not usually redid.

✓ Actually, I haven't because I said I'm not really keen on news so I don't usually read it.

'Redid' is the past tense of 'redo' and is incorrect here. The correct verb is 'read' in present tense to match 'usually'. Also, 'read' is pronounced differently but spelled the same in present and past tense.

× Yes I do because I fight us.

✓ Yes, I do because I find some news interesting.

'Fight us' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is probably 'find some news'. Also, 'news' is uncountable singular.

× Some of the nude maybe impressed me so I really want to talk to my friend about it and how I feel about that news.

✓ Some of the news may have impressed me so I really want to talk to my friends about it and how I feel about that news.

'Nude' is a typo for 'news'. 'Maybe' should be 'may have' to indicate possibility in past. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'talk to'.