News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、"a project news"の表現は不自然です。また、内容がやや一般的で具体性に欠けます。より具体的な例を挙げ、語彙を豊かにすることを意識しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am interested in news and I watch it on my smartphone every morning. For example, I follow updates about technology projects and major world events, which help me stay informed.

Gợi ý: "TV's"は誤った複数形で、"TV"または"television"が適切です。また、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。より正確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually watch news on television and my smartphone. Using a smartphone is convenient because I can access news anytime and anywhere. Additionally, I use AI tools to help me understand global news better.

Gợi ý: "getting collect information"は不自然な表現です。文法の改善とともに、理由をより具体的に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a journalist in the future because it is essential for society to share and gather important information. Moreover, by collecting news, people in Japan can better understand global issues.

Gợi ý: "on the newspaper"は不自然で、"in the newspaper"が正しいです。また、"a lot of important information"は不可算名詞なので"much important information"や具体的な内容を示すと良いです。内容の明確化と文法の改善をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, this morning I read the news in the newspaper. It contained important information about politics and local events. Therefore, I want to share this news with others today.

Gợi ý: "they also broadens"は主語と動詞の一致が間違っています。"they also broaden"が正しいです。内容は良いので、文法の細かいミスを直し、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I talk with my friends about the news every day because it improves our critical thinking. Additionally, they also broaden my horizons, allowing me to see things from different perspectives.

× I watch news on the smart phones every day in the morning.

✓ I watch the news on smartphones every day in the morning.

The word 'news' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'the' when referring to specific news. 'Smart phones' should be one word 'smartphones' and no article is needed before it in plural form.

× Watching the news provides me important information such as a project news and major news.

✓ Watching the news provides me with important information such as project news and major news.

The verb 'provides' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate what is being provided. Also, 'a project news' is incorrect because 'news' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× I usually watch news on the TV's and smartphones.

✓ I usually watch the news on TVs and smartphones.

'News' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'the' when referring to specific news. 'TV's' is incorrect as a plural; the plural of TV is 'TVs' without an apostrophe.

× By using smartphones we can watch news every time everywhere which is convenient for me and I also use AI to understand all over the World News.

✓ By using smartphones, we can watch the news anytime and anywhere, which is convenient for me, and I also use AI to understand world news.

'Every time everywhere' is incorrect; 'anytime and anywhere' is the correct phrase. 'All over the World News' is awkward; 'world news' is sufficient and does not need 'all over the'.

× I want to be a journalist in the future because it is quite essential for society to give and collect important information.

✓ I want to be a journalist in the future because it is quite essential for society to give and collect important information.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Additionally, by getting collect information, people in Japan can understand the world well.

✓ Additionally, by collecting information, people in Japan can understand the world well.

The phrase 'getting collect information' is incorrect. The correct form is 'collecting information' using the gerund form after 'by'.

× Yes, this morning I've read the news on the newspaper.

✓ Yes, this morning I've read the news in the newspaper.

We say 'in the newspaper' not 'on the newspaper' because the news is contained inside the newspaper.

× On this newspaper there were a lot of important information about politics and with us.

✓ In this newspaper, there was a lot of important information about politics and us.

'Information' is uncountable and singular, so 'was' should be used instead of 'were'. Also, 'on this newspaper' should be 'in this newspaper'. The phrase 'and with us' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'and us' is more appropriate if referring to inclusion.

× So I want to share this news with others today.

✓ So, I want to share this news with others today.

Adding a comma after 'So' improves sentence clarity and flow.

× Yes, I talk with my friends about the news every day because talking with friends improves our critical thinking.

✓ Yes, I talk with my friends about the news every day because talking with friends improves my critical thinking.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here because the subject is singular 'I'; it should be 'my' to match the subject.

× Additionally, they also broadens my horizon.

✓ Additionally, they also broaden my horizons.

The verb should be 'broaden' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. Also, 'horizon' is usually pluralized as 'horizons' in this context.