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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you interested in news?

Thí sinh

It really depends on what kind of news it is. If we're talking about news related to celebrities, such as gossips or rumors, I tend to enjoy a reading or watching the news. But if we're talking about political news, then.

Giám khảo

How do you usually find news?

Thí sinh

I have a news app on my phone so every day when I wake up I can easily access what's going on in the world, which helps me keep updated with the world.

Giám khảo

Would you like to be a journalist?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think I'm a good type for being a journalist in the future. Being a journalist requires certain qualities, which I think I don't have that qualities. Also, I'm always My dream is to become.

Giám khảo

Have you read the news this morning?

Thí sinh

No, this morning I just catched up on my sleep, which made me forgot to read the latest news. Uh, however, I read some news yesterday.

Giám khảo

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Thí sinh

Yes, since with all of my friends, uh, it's always curious about the celebrities and their lives. So we often talked about the the news related to celebrities such as singer or dancer things like.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you interested in news?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免句子不完整和语法错误,保持语言自然流畅。可以直接表达观点,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I am interested in news, especially about celebrities because I find their lives fascinating. However, I am less interested in political news as it can be complicated and sometimes boring.

How do you usually find news?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更自然且信息更具体。

Ví dụ: I usually find news through a news app on my phone. Every morning, I check it to stay updated with current events, which helps me understand what's happening around the world.

Would you like to be a journalist?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。应直接回答问题,避免重复,补充具体原因,并保持句子完整。

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to be a journalist because it requires strong communication skills and quick thinking, which I feel I lack. Instead, my dream is to become a teacher.

Have you read the news this morning?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 注意时态和语法的正确使用,避免口语化的填充词,回答应更简洁且连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I overslept. However, I did read some news yesterday to stay informed.

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,应简洁明了地表达观点,并使用恰当的词汇和连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often talk with my friends about news, especially about celebrities. We enjoy discussing their lives and recent events related to singers or dancers.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I tend to enjoy a reading or watching the news.

I tend to enjoy reading or watching the news.

动词后面不需要加冠词'a',且动词' enjoy'后应直接接动名词形式,故应为'reading'而非'a reading'。

Sentence structure errors

× But if we're talking about political news, then.

But if we're talking about political news, then I don't really enjoy it.

句子不完整,缺少谓语部分,导致表达不清,应补充完整句子。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× which helps me keep updated with the world.

which helps me keep updated on the world.

短语'keep updated'后应接介词'on'表示对某事保持更新,'with'用法不当。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I don't think I'm a good type for being a journalist in the future.

No, I don't think I'm the right type to be a journalist in the future.

'a good type for being'表达不自然,且'good type'搭配不当,应改为'the right type to be'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Being a journalist requires certain qualities, which I think I don't have that qualities.

Being a journalist requires certain qualities, which I think I don't have.

'that qualities'用法错误,'qualities'前不应加'that',且句尾重复,删去更通顺。

Sentence structure errors

× Also, I'm always My dream is to become.

Also, my dream is to become a journalist.

句子结构混乱,缺少谓语,需重组句子使其完整。

Past tense issue

× No, this morning I just catched up on my sleep, which made me forgot to read the latest news.

No, this morning I just caught up on my sleep, which made me forget to read the latest news.

'catched'是错误的过去式,正确为'caught';'forgot'应为动词原形'forget',因前面有助动词'made'。

Past tense issue

× Uh, however, I read some news yesterday.

Uh, however, I read some news yesterday.

此句中'read'发音为过去式,书写正确,无需修改。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, since with all of my friends, uh, it's always curious about the celebrities and their lives.

Yes, since all of my friends are always curious about celebrities and their lives.

'since with all of my friends'结构不正确,应改为'since all of my friends are';'it's always curious'主语错误,应为'friends'。

Past tense issue

× So we often talked about the the news related to celebrities such as singer or dancer things like.

So we often talk about the news related to celebrities such as singers or dancers and things like that.

'talked'与频率副词'often'搭配时应使用一般现在时'talk';'singer or dancer'应为复数形式;句尾表达不完整,需补充。

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