News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example, mention the types of news you follow and why they interest you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay informed about important political and educational events. This knowledge allows me to understand the world better and make informed decisions.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Be specific about which social media platforms you use and why they are helpful.

Ví dụ: I usually get news from social media platforms like Twitter and Facebook because they provide real-time updates. This helps me stay connected with global events and make better decisions.

Gợi ý: Complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I would not like to be a journalist because it requires a lot of time and specialized skills. Therefore, I find it challenging and demanding. I prefer working in the educational sector where I can contribute differently.

Gợi ý: Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Provide a clear answer with supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain your reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I read the news this morning on online platforms because they are convenient and always available. This helps me stay informed and participate in conversations about current events.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more structured and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement, then give specific examples using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because it affects our daily lives and decisions. For example, discussing the weather helps us plan our activities better.

× I'm interested in news because I like to keep in in touch with the, with the important news with whether it's political or educational one in order to enhance my knowledge about things which are going, which are, which are going around me and then to to.

✓ I'm interested in news because I like to keep in touch with important news, whether it's political or educational, in order to enhance my knowledge about things which are going on around me.

The phrase 'keep in in touch with the, with the important news with whether' contains redundant prepositions and articles. The correct preposition is 'keep in touch with' without extra 'in' or 'with'. Also, 'whether' should not be preceded by 'with'. The sentence is corrected to remove unnecessary prepositions and articles for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually find the news on social media nowadays rather than newspaper.

✓ I usually find the news on social media nowadays rather than in newspapers.

The phrase 'rather than newspaper' is incorrect because 'newspaper' should be plural and preceded by the preposition 'in' when referring to the medium. The correct phrase is 'rather than in newspapers'.

× I like to scroll videos and posts looking for the latest news to keep in touch with the whole world and to keep update to the events which are going around me to to improve my decision depending on.

✓ I like to scroll through videos and posts looking for the latest news to keep in touch with the whole world and to keep updated on the events which are going on around me to improve my decision making.

The phrase 'keep update to' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep updated on'. Also, 'scroll videos' should be 'scroll through videos'. The phrase 'decision depending on' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'decision making' for clarity. Additionally, 'going around me' should be 'going on around me'.

× I'm not interested about being a journalist because I think that this career requires requires time and it requires specialist calls.

✓ I'm not interested in being a journalist because I think that this career requires time and it requires specialists.

The correct preposition after 'interested' is 'in', not 'about'. Also, 'specialist calls' is incorrect; it should be 'specialists' or 'specialist skills' depending on intended meaning. Here, 'specialists' is used for clarity.

× I usually use from online platforms because I think that they are available and convenient.

✓ I usually use online platforms because I think that they are available and convenient.

The phrase 'use from online platforms' is incorrect; the preposition 'from' is unnecessary and should be omitted. The correct phrase is 'use online platforms'.

× I like to be informed about the events around me in order to be able to participate in a conversation including these kinds of in in including these kinds of news.

✓ I like to be informed about the events around me in order to be able to participate in conversations including these kinds of news.

The phrase 'including these kinds of in in including these kinds of news' is repetitive and contains unnecessary prepositions. It is corrected to 'including these kinds of news' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× news playing a crucial role of our daily lives because they are related to us, they are related to to to our they they depends they depend on our lives and decisions.

✓ News plays a crucial role in our daily lives because it is related to us and depends on our lives and decisions.

'News' is a singular noun and requires singular verb forms: 'plays' instead of 'playing' and 'depends' instead of 'depend' when referring to 'news'. Also, 'depends' should agree with the singular subject 'news'. The phrase 'crucial role of' is corrected to 'crucial role in'. Redundant words and repetitions are removed for clarity.