News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は全体的に内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「a news」ではなく「news」と複数形扱いにすること、また「express it in the article」よりも「express it in articles」や「write articles about it」の方が自然です。さらに、冗長な部分を減らし、より簡潔で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. As a journalist, I need to keep up with news worldwide. I chose this profession because I find discovering and writing about news very exciting and stimulating.

Gợi ý: 回答に多くの「uh」などのフィラーが含まれており、流暢さを損なっています。また、単数・複数の使い分け（"specialists"や"research institutions"）に注意が必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より論理的で自然な回答を目指しましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually find news by conducting interviews with specialists. Since I mainly cover science and technology, I often talk to well-known experts at universities and research institutions.

Gợi ý: 回答に多くのフィラーがあり、文法的な誤りもあります（例：「the ability of the area」や「it's very big competitors」）。また、内容がやや曖昧なので、具体的にどのような挑戦があるのかを明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Actually, I am currently a journalist and I want to continue this profession for a long time. However, the biggest challenge is adapting to new technologies like artificial intelligence, which are becoming strong competitors in the media industry.

Gợi ý: 多くのフィラーがあり、文法的な誤りも目立ちます（例：「had to ready」ではなく「had to prepare」や「there were not enough time」ではなく「there was not enough time」）。また、「routing」は誤用で「routine」が正しいです。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I had to prepare for an English exam and didn't have enough time. However, I usually check newspapers or TV news as part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: 回答の最後の部分が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです（「The same for us」）。また、文のつながりがやや不自然なので、接続詞を使って論理的に説明すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often discuss news about social issues, politics, and international affairs with my friends. Since I am a journalist, they frequently ask me for advice on how to understand the news better, so these conversations are very important to us.

× The reason why I choose the journalist as my profession is that a news is very interesting.

✓ The reason why I choose journalism as my profession is that news is very interesting.

'News' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'journalist' is a person, but here the intended meaning is the profession, so 'journalism' is correct.

× Especially seeking the news and express it in the article is very stimulating and exciting for me.

✓ Especially seeking news and expressing it in articles is very stimulating and exciting for me.

'News' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, parallel structure requires 'expressing' to match 'seeking'. 'Article' should be plural to indicate articles in general.

× I always find the news by, uh, conducting interviews with the specialists.

✓ I always find news by conducting interviews with specialists.

'News' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Specialists' is plural and does not need 'the' unless referring to specific known specialists.

× So I always, uh, talk with the specialist in universities or the research institutions who is very well known.

✓ So I always talk with specialists in universities or research institutions who are very well known.

'Specialist' should be plural 'specialists' to match 'universities' and 'institutions'. Also, 'who is' changes to 'who are' for plural subject.

× Umm, recently the ability of the area has increased dramatically and it's very big competitors.

✓ Umm, recently the ability of the area has increased dramatically and it has very big competitors.

The sentence is unclear; 'it's' (it is) should be 'it has' to indicate possession. However, 'ability of the area' is vague and may need rephrasing, but focusing on grammar, 'it's' is incorrect here.

× No, I didn't read the news, umm, this morning, uh, because, uh, I had to, uh, ready for the English examination and there were not enough time to check the newspaper and the TV programs.

✓ No, I didn't read the news this morning because I had to get ready for the English examination and there was not enough time to check the newspaper and the TV programs.

'Ready' is an adjective and needs a verb like 'get' before it. 'There were not enough time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable singular, so 'was' is correct.

× Uh, but usually I always check the content of the paper or the TV, which is one of the routing for me.

✓ But usually I always check the content of the paper or the TV, which is one of the routines for me.

'Routing' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'routine'. Also, 'the TV' is acceptable but 'TV' alone is more natural.

× Yes, I always talk about news relating to social problems, politics and international affairs, and that's mainly because I am a journalist and my friends are always asking me how to read the news very well.

✓ Yes, I always talk about news related to social problems, politics, and international affairs, and that's mainly because I am a journalist and my friends are always asking me how to read the news very well.

'Relating to' is correct but 'related to' is more natural in this context.